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Published: 2013-08-19 23:14:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1236; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Oooooh booy. I changed essentially everything.

The blood was changed from "diamond" to a light blue mutantblood (#01b5ff, if you're curious (you are)) to stay in the same vein of uniqueness, but keeping to an actual possible color. Her shirt's length was changed to a normal shirt length, as it should have been originally, considering basic troll fashion. Her sign is depicted in grey due to her mutant blood, and her shoes are the same color that her sign used to be.

The horns kept the same basic design, perhaps a little better drawn, as well as using the correct coloration. Her hair was also kept in the same way, three long strands in the front, the back kept short.

For effect, I also fixed her story to a more plausible idea: her lusus, an ocelot, took her away as soon as it could, attempting to protect her from those who would wish to kill her. She lives in solitude with her lusus for a while, keeping her blood color out of sight, staying generally cheery, despite the horrid circumstances, until one day she manages to get injured in the presence of a highblood. That highblood, of course, kills her.

Boring story, sure, but more likely to happen than her falling off Alternia and pretending to be human. She has no connection to Eridan, Karkat, or Gamzee, in any way.

Other than that, I changed her name from Dialla Kimoa, to Dialla Kimoya. (It was so close...)
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Comments: 45

alwaysEternal413 [2017-07-09 23:13:49 +0000 UTC]

This is actually pretty cute! I like her. Good job actually making her a believable fantroll.Β 

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LotusDragonof5000 [2014-03-01 17:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is amazing! Such an improvement from that horrible Mary Sue KAWAII DESU atrocity....

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BrokenWingsOfLight [2013-11-06 02:26:31 +0000 UTC]

I love this design~!!


It's original and it all fits together~

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Thehomestuckocguy [2013-11-05 01:28:54 +0000 UTC]

*Clap*

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Thehomestuckocguy [2013-11-05 01:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Look here, friend. I made an alternate account (From my old, non-working one) just so I can reward you on what a magnificent person you are. You contribute well to this fandom, and should be very proud of what you have done with your talent. If you EVER made a fantroll, I would find some sort of way to like, favorite, reblog or do whatever to it to make it more popular.


You are amazing.

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BadFantroll-Revamps In reply to Thehomestuckocguy [2013-11-05 23:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much! You're way too kind.

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silvercat0129 [2013-11-03 02:48:51 +0000 UTC]

HUGE improvement! Great job!

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BadFantroll-Revamps In reply to silvercat0129 [2013-11-05 23:13:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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silvercat0129 In reply to BadFantroll-Revamps [2013-11-05 23:16:07 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Sollux-Uchiha [2013-09-11 17:55:46 +0000 UTC]

ok listen she wears RED okay and wtf she doe not have a lusus u RUIN her by changing that her HOLE STORY is that she GROW UYP ON EARTH OK!!! like i think this is cute but wtf u change all the good thing and make her boring and by change her story that changes her pesonality and her name is RUBY!!! dialla is a nicksname -_-

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Pinkbat5 In reply to Sollux-Uchiha [2014-05-26 21:04:34 +0000 UTC]

I am sorry but noone cares

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snowypuppy In reply to Sollux-Uchiha [2014-01-02 15:39:27 +0000 UTC]

Excuse the people that know better, sweety. She made your fantroll BETTER. When she is not around, your fantroll will be forever hated, mocked, and insulted. Also, you don't know anything about blood. Toodaloo, low-brain.Β 

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Sollux-Uchiha In reply to snowypuppy [2014-02-25 10:12:37 +0000 UTC]

that ur opinyon and btw why do u care about my char if i like her why do u need 2 fix her shes my char she not afect u loser

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SINISTERSystem In reply to Sollux-Uchiha [2014-05-27 22:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but the point of a fan-character and putting it into a story that isn't something you originally created. he character you made should atleast make sense in it, not stick out like a sore thumb or take the spotlight.

AKA, don't make your characters Sues, or atleast don't try to.

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hamsterxoxxx In reply to Sollux-Uchiha [2013-11-16 05:17:20 +0000 UTC]

hunny, they made her a real character. I'm afraid the one you made had too many things that needed fixing.

-not hate, but honest truth-

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Sollux-Uchiha In reply to hamsterxoxxx [2014-02-25 10:13:17 +0000 UTC]

no my char is how i like btw she is MY char so it my call wether she need fix or no

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SINISTERSystem In reply to Sollux-Uchiha [2013-10-29 01:06:33 +0000 UTC]

Learn to type.

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Sollux-Uchiha In reply to SINISTERSystem [2013-11-04 09:07:48 +0000 UTC]

no becuz idc baka

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SINISTERSystem In reply to Sollux-Uchiha [2013-11-04 23:37:01 +0000 UTC]

First of all, being able to type correctly actually makes people want to listen to you. Two, "insulting" me in Japanese is childish, overrated, and completely stupid.

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Sollux-Uchiha In reply to SINISTERSystem [2014-03-01 11:52:47 +0000 UTC]

lol b a ka

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SINISTERSystem In reply to Sollux-Uchiha [2014-03-01 22:22:04 +0000 UTC]

Can someone please help this retarded person out?

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Pinkbat5 In reply to SINISTERSystem [2014-05-26 21:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Do you want me to get my death ray?

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SINISTERSystem In reply to Pinkbat5 [2014-05-26 21:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Death rays don't exist, our science isn't advanced enough.

This is over the internet, I'm not afraid.

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Pinkbat5 In reply to SINISTERSystem [2014-05-26 22:03:32 +0000 UTC]

I will summon a death ray with my rageΒ  Β 

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SINISTERSystem In reply to Pinkbat5 [2014-05-26 22:07:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm not intimidated.

Nice try.

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Pinkbat5 In reply to SINISTERSystem [2014-05-27 13:54:20 +0000 UTC]

It's not my rage for you. :/ I was just trying to make a joke, geez!

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SINISTERSystem In reply to Pinkbat5 [2014-05-27 22:26:03 +0000 UTC]

That was a fail joke, but here.

Have an internet so you can try again.

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Pinkbat5 In reply to SINISTERSystem [2014-05-28 14:41:29 +0000 UTC]

Uh ok

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BadFantroll-Revamps In reply to Sollux-Uchiha [2013-09-11 21:34:21 +0000 UTC]

My apologies, naturally. However, this was only my way of suggesting some minor (uh) changes. I understand that changing her whole story was a little much, but the entire premise was a little far-fetched, if you don't mind me saying. As well, all changes I made to her design or story were made to make her entirely canon, hopefully as a push in the right direction for you. I think your story and design were very original, and I definitely respect them! However, in the Homestuck fandom, things like that will get you hate.


Once again, I'm sorry if I offended.

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Sollux-Uchiha In reply to BadFantroll-Revamps [2013-09-11 21:44:59 +0000 UTC]

no u didnt offend but i like her story how it is the pic is still cute tho ^^

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tame-wolf In reply to Sollux-Uchiha [2013-09-11 18:00:39 +0000 UTC]

but you added her as your favorites :I

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Sollux-Uchiha In reply to tame-wolf [2013-09-11 18:15:26 +0000 UTC]

i add everythign about MY CHARS to my folder about them so i can no how is drawing them

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tame-wolf In reply to Sollux-Uchiha [2013-09-13 07:36:33 +0000 UTC]

oooh :3

understood ;3

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EmieChii [2013-09-11 09:22:36 +0000 UTC]

DAMN. This is some good job right here! Β 

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Nica--Draws [2013-09-10 10:00:46 +0000 UTC]

You bro, you are an amazing person for helping that... girl out. MUCH BETTER!

Brofist to you!

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Rainy-bleu [2013-09-02 23:22:34 +0000 UTC]

SCREAMS

YOU ARE MY HERO

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BadFantroll-Revamps In reply to Rainy-bleu [2013-09-03 02:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Heh heh, I try.


Thanks.

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SweaterFox [2013-08-20 00:22:02 +0000 UTC]

I love you for improving this fantroll. I mean seroiusly this is so much better. She isn't in any way sexualized, of "dimond blood" or whatever else her creator made her into. She actually is a likable character now.Β 

I love the other revamps as well. You've sure earned a watcher, I can't wait to see more improved fantrolls!

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BadFantroll-Revamps In reply to SweaterFox [2013-08-20 00:29:08 +0000 UTC]

Holy fudge, thank you.

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twynny-chan [2013-08-19 23:37:23 +0000 UTC]

ho....ly...shit.... you did it! you actually managed to make something out of her!

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BadFantroll-Revamps In reply to twynny-chan [2013-08-20 00:01:31 +0000 UTC]

*laughs alone with salad* No fantroll is too bad to fix.

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twynny-chan In reply to BadFantroll-Revamps [2013-08-20 00:37:52 +0000 UTC]

but what if i made a sister account to yours "GoodFantroll-Downgrades"

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BadFantroll-Revamps In reply to twynny-chan [2013-08-20 00:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goof.

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twynny-chan In reply to BadFantroll-Revamps [2013-08-20 01:40:18 +0000 UTC]

should i, should i really?

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BadFantroll-Revamps In reply to twynny-chan [2013-08-20 01:55:49 +0000 UTC]

Yiss, Do it.

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