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Published: 2011-09-11 03:50:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 558; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 28
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I must admit, I've never drawn a flying pony before. Dragons sure, but this . . . this is new.And super fun!
Anyway, this is my half of a trade with *xarazura . I only had about 30 min to make it (Thank you hectic schedule) and it didn't turn out to bad for such a quick job. Skyfyre is s beautiful character, you don't see to many well done unicorn/pegasus (Pegacorn? Unisus? Please correct me if I'm wrong) designs out there. I had tons of fun drawing her!
Hope you like it!
MLP belongs to Hasbro
Skyfyre belongs to
Art's mine
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A unicorn/pegasus is called an alicorn.
Nice work for a half-hour's work!
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Thanks 
Thank you so much!
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That's okay!
LOLOLOLOLOL
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I like that kind of backgrounds - when the main character steps a bit out of the opicture, making it more dynamic and realistic <3. A nice way of drawing mares head. But, to be honest I prefer you drawing male characters ^^'.
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Thank you! Yeah, I love the Character-popping-out look 
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The fandom, more often than not, likes to refer to ponies with the combined characteristics of both unicorns and pegasi as 'Alicorns'. Not sure where it come from myself.
Anyhoof!
Critique: I don't see much wrong with this, mostly anatomy. The problem spots, from my perspective, are the horn, left foreleg, and where the tail meets the body.
The horn is too thin, bends slightly, and is also very slightly off center. The Foreleg closest to the viewer could use some rework, the biggest issue is that it is smaller than the leg behind it. When considering perspective, two objects of the same size will be different depending on where they are in relation to the viewer, the further back it is the smaller it should be. out side of size the line for the shoulder(or whatever it's called on a horse) travels too far up the body. The tail seems to connect to the body ever so slightly too low, at least that's my view on it.
Misc. stuff... Seems like some of your outlines don't connect all the way, they tapper off as they meet another line or come to a point. I figure that's a result of using the brush tool and a tablet. Cutie Mark could use some refinement, they tend to be very clearly printed on the pony, her cutie mark is a little rough...
Acknowledging that you had very little time to draw this I would be willing to admit all the things I brought up are probably a result of being rushed, certainly they arn't anything that couldn't be avoided or fixed with a little more time.
End critique.
(sorry if I rambled on there a bit)
A very well done piece of art, all in all. I look forward to seeing more from you.
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Naw, there was no rambling, only good advice
Derp, this is the second time I've messed up the perspective. I really gotta keep an eye on that D: Now that you've pointed it out, I can't stop looking at the horn xD I'll fix it up when I have some time. Thank you so much for the well thought out critique! It means a lot
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Is that for a #Cutie-Art-Crusaders trade? I'm a bit confused XD
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Aw, thanks! It was a pleasure
Yes ma'am, it most definitely is
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AMG <3 you did such an amazing job!!!
I love how you did this!
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