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BakaKnight In reply to Poopbutt-chan [2010-12-24 16:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Is it missing something?

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Poopbutt-chan In reply to BakaKnight [2010-12-25 01:19:00 +0000 UTC]

My boyfriend made that comment last night on my account because he was really drunk and looking through all the new submissions to the vocaloid fanart group and tearing the shit out of everything, but I can try to give an honest critique anyway. ^_^;;

The lineart is very thick and uneven, it looks like you put a filter on this in Photoshop but it probably actually looked better before you did that. She seems to have two dots on either side of her nose representing nostrils, but this makes her nose look very large, which I think is the opposite of the stylization effect you wanted by representing her nose with only the typical anime vertical line. I'd suggest either erasing both of the dots or just the one on the left. Her eyes seem very low down on her head, raise them up a little higher so they're closer under the eyebrows.

Her index, middle, and ring finger look like they don't have any bone or joints in them. Straighten them out, give them more definition. Her thumb is also very pointy and should be a bit longer in comparison to the size of the rest of the fingers. The top line on her palm also looks a little too high up, move it down just a bit.

Aside from these faults, from the knees up, this isn't completely bad. I'm not trying to be mean, but it kinda looks like her legs spontaneously collapsed and broke in half lol. Her lower legs should be longer, her feet should be bigger. The front foot also looks like her ankle is broken and is twisting around. I think it would look better if it was pointing in the opposite direction, because the cutesy pidgeon-toed anime legs thing doesn't look right for the pose she's in.

When you're learning to draw a difficult new pose, I'd suggest taking a picture of yourself doing it first so you can learn how the human anatomy would look before attempting to stylize it.

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BakaKnight In reply to Poopbutt-chan [2010-12-26 11:35:44 +0000 UTC]

Okay

And thanks a lot for your critique, I really need it! Because I'm not very good artist and want to improve and anatomy is what I mostly need to improve, I really appreciate this critique it sure helps me a lot in future. Thank you :3

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BakaKnight In reply to BlackSunshineGirl [2010-12-23 12:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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BlackSunshineGirl In reply to BakaKnight [2010-12-23 16:41:26 +0000 UTC]

anytime ^^

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BakaKnight In reply to bejja [2010-12-20 17:19:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, nice that you like my coloring
Also thanks for the favs

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