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bananastickerstealer — slow down.
Published: 2008-03-08 06:21:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description i stood by the open doorway,
my back against the cold, brick building.
the cool mist sprayed on my cheeks,
and i was soothed by the chill and the fresh air.
loneliness lingered there with me.
cars hummed by,
and i wondered if the rain would last.
i wondered where the drivers were going
and what they were coming from.
why does everyone drive so fast?
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Comments: 3

kkkkkara [2008-03-08 22:35:15 +0000 UTC]

mmm, imagery.

i can totally feel the cold brick.

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bananastickerstealer In reply to kkkkkara [2008-03-15 04:44:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i really appreciate that.

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myshadow535 [2008-03-08 09:31:29 +0000 UTC]

simple elegeant and totaly satisfiying to my state o mind right now, GOOD JOB

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