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Bantranic β Puppet v2
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Published: 2017-08-26 22:47:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 951; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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yup, it took me 3 years to fix a forehead, you're welcomeRelated content
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This is a really well done Puppet model and one of the better ones I've seen. However there are some things I think you should fix and improve on in future Pupper models. The UV on the tearstreaks are pretty off and should be more condensed. The specular on the mask and red are fine and the black's UV should have a hardness specular along with a color specular. I'd suggest using Mistberg's mats for the Puppet since his are almost spot on. The edges of the Puppet's smile are too smooth and should instead be pointier or sharper. The model overall looks pretty decent and I like how well you made the eyeholes. The eye sockets and the mouth are probably the most difficult part since you have to make the cuts look as smooth as possible and I really think you were able to achieve that with this model. I don't think this model would be good enough to release but it would be a good model to improve on.
Hopefully this critique was constructive and I hope to see a new or updated Puppet with those things fixed. Also, a little tip, in order to give the Puppet the sad/angry optical illusion face, just move a couple of the verts on the upper eyelid forward but leave the edge verts of the eyelid the way they are.
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i think it's pretty good but, you should fix mouth because it's too smooth and the smile is kinda weird and you should fix the UV on tearstreaks because it's pretty off. BTW, nice model
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yep, i made a 3 year image
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