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BayouPoemSpinner — Dream Shift
Published: 2006-04-09 04:33:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 234; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 6
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Description Fur rustles in the chilled winds,
ears perk in curiousity.

A clear blue sky signals Heaven,
the golden sun awakens from slumber.

Paws barely touch ground,
rays of light grant hopeful dreams.

Tails shall soar,
like banners of joy.

Muzzles shall be lifted upwards,
and eyes shall gaze into the beyond.

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Dreams shall be ended,
to bring sadness to many hearts.

Human bodies will be weary,
but the animal soul still dreams.

........................................................

Eyes shimmer,
and the moon conquers sun.

A human body drifts to sleep,
while the body of the animal awakens.
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Comments: 10

blazingshadow12403 [2009-12-04 06:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I lurvz dream shifting. If only it would happen every night...

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SchrodingersFox [2006-04-09 23:09:44 +0000 UTC]

I do like this muchly. Great imagery and a good meter.

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BayouPoemSpinner In reply to SchrodingersFox [2006-04-10 22:33:13 +0000 UTC]

Thankie thankie!! ^_^

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SchrodingersFox In reply to BayouPoemSpinner [2006-04-11 17:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Anytime, Love. n_n

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meshugga [2006-04-09 05:53:24 +0000 UTC]

Ooo. nice free verse. You make it sound fun. ...i need to look into ways to get your thought patterns where you want them before you sleep so you can "plan" a dream. ive heard their are ways to do it. ...Although thats not quite the same as a dream shift. At least from the therianthropic standpoint. Ah whatever. Ill shut up now. Im rambling. Seriously, ill shut up. I promise *knife fight noises followed by gurgling*

He'll shut up.

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BayouPoemSpinner In reply to meshugga [2006-04-09 14:04:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the compliment! ^_^

*listens to knife fight noises* 0_0!!

O...Kay

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oversunoversky [2006-04-09 05:52:35 +0000 UTC]

Great job I really like it....

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BayouPoemSpinner In reply to oversunoversky [2006-04-09 14:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^

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Hezza-chan [2006-04-09 05:26:31 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT *huggles* Its such a strange feeling at first, but you capture it really well.

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BayouPoemSpinner In reply to Hezza-chan [2006-04-09 14:05:42 +0000 UTC]

*ish huggled* Thanks Sis, glad you like it!

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