Comments: 53
LaCroixGrimoire [2012-08-05 22:49:04 +0000 UTC]
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Kayso, the lighting and the choice of colors is very nice. I also enjoyed the line work for this piece a lot, but I do feel that your digital painting skills could be sharpened a bit.
Most noticeably, you need to work on blending and brush strokes a lot more. The best place I can point out an example of this problem is the hand with the visible palm where you can see the blending is uneven, giving it a strange and unbelievable texture.
The edges tend to be a little wobbly, like on the right shoulder, where you should have sharpened it up more.
Also, the face is slightly askew and out of proportion, the head should be smaller at the top since the camera angle is lower and she's looking upward.
While the colors and lighting are a fantastic start, instead of multiplying your layers you should try using the LAB sliders to pick some variations of color because it causes some less-appealing tones to appear. Most notably the skin, which ends up looking muddied and unnatural.
I think the best parts of this is where the hair spills on her shoulders, and the water ball between her palms.
Great job with the dramatic composition.
Keep practicing!
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MultifacetedMage In reply to LaCroixGrimoire [2012-08-06 15:48:27 +0000 UTC]
me personally i'd like to see the costume color changed because the sphere in her hands blends too much into her costume. I also find it interesting that the sphere is glowing and yet I see no light source eminating from within it or from outside of it she is also clearly is looking at something; why is there no reflection of what she is looking at in her eyes? why is her left hand clearly Unproportionate to her right hand?
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CastitatusLilium [2012-09-14 23:31:27 +0000 UTC]
TBH, it looks like she has an uber long neck. It's a bit off-putting.
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desideriums [2012-08-06 17:49:59 +0000 UTC]
perfect anatomy this is really great
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Mayu2 [2012-08-06 15:19:22 +0000 UTC]
WOOOOOWWWWW. It's lovely.
can I borrow some of your talent? :<
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AdrineR227 [2012-08-06 01:44:54 +0000 UTC]
I like it, I really do. The only thing that looks out of place are the eyes like the shadings not right or something, but it's still really good.
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nerdygangsta [2012-08-06 01:03:44 +0000 UTC]
its amazing! you need to be more cofident
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Midnight4200 [2012-08-05 17:46:53 +0000 UTC]
the lighting is gorgeous!
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Eziosgirl347 [2012-08-05 16:29:12 +0000 UTC]
WOW, very nice. The lighting is wonderful, this is definitely one of your best
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andiree [2012-08-05 13:08:53 +0000 UTC]
WOOOWW.
this is really good, i think one of your best.
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skygazer17 [2012-08-05 07:12:19 +0000 UTC]
great lighting
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Faithmonster [2012-08-04 23:24:18 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing!
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LeapinLLamas [2012-08-04 21:37:19 +0000 UTC]
The angle is amazing!!!
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GlitchCity [2012-08-04 19:11:22 +0000 UTC]
Awesome shades of blue, kudos :]
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JokerandHarleyLover [2012-08-04 18:29:37 +0000 UTC]
Isn't the arm wrap suppose to be on her right arm? It dosen't really matter, this is well done!!! :3
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ShortFocus [2012-08-04 17:45:45 +0000 UTC]
love love LOVE the colours! Great job!
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StarKeeper153 [2012-08-04 17:20:40 +0000 UTC]
I love the colors and the angle! Very well done!
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BoomersGirl98 [2012-08-04 17:12:29 +0000 UTC]
*insta-fave*
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