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BBRaeluv — Poem Breathe written by Jessi
Published: 2010-05-26 05:16:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 581; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 5
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BreatheThe Sky falls down
The rain clinks on my window
You're all alone
Breathe
In a shining summer sunset
Listening to the lightening bugs
The grass tangled in my golden hair
Breathe
The crowd is alive
You close your eyes
The gun fires POW and you're running
Breathe
Everyone is there
The year's almost out
Just one last walk out the big oak doors
Breathe
Standing in the parking lot
Seeing him again
That happy excited tingle
Just Breathe Love,
Just Breathe
Don't be afraid to fall
Don't be afraid to cry
Don't be afraid of your future
Don't be afraid to fly
Breathe.
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Comments: 2
That there is an amazing piece of poetry. Seriously, it should be a DD. It had wonderful pace, and the constant ('Breathe') was used well. I love how at the end, it shifts to a more dynamic, rhythmic style, and how the format separates the last stanza from the rest. 
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