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Bc4life — You're such a nuissance
Published: 2012-09-09 16:24:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 828; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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"You're such a nuisance.Always crawling back to me.
Always wearing the same excuses.
The excuses of
"I will change,I learn my lesson"
But always repeat the same mistake
over and over again
well I guess is time to cut the bad grass..."
Talon is annoyed
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I don't normally write critiques, but this piece caught my eye so I thought I'd give it a go.
First of all, I really like it. I really like his pose, I really like his long lean body, and I really like the soft shading drawing attention to musculature while not taking away from the fact that he's obviously covered in luxurious fur.
I like the way that you've done the indentation on the couch, and I like that you've clearly put a lot of thought into light and weight distribution.
I also really like the way that you've put detail on his clothes, and the way you've matched his accessories with his hair so that the eye is drawn all the way along the picture.
There are a couple of things that I would suggest:
Firstly, (I'm not really sure because I'm not familiar with the character, so this could be intentional and he has like four eyes or something) his eye looks way too far down on his face. If he does only have two eyes, I think the picture would have been fine with just his hair covering the eye.
Secondly, I think that while you've done a good job of shading, I think that you could have been a bit braver with the contrast between dark and light and I think that would have given this picture a lot more depth. However, if you were aiming purely for a cartoon-style, you've nailed it.
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Thank you for the critic ^^
I agree I could've gonne a bit darker with shades not only would have it give more depth but also a bit of a darker ambiance.
But i still have trouble wondering if I go to dark or to light sometime,but is something I will really try to improve.
and no he doesn't have 4 eyes XD
But i wanted to show to give it more impact.
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Ya, I thought it was a great picture!
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I didn't do it!!!! oAo not on purpose anyway.... x3
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oAo womp womp waaaa!!! * run awaaaaaaay!!!!!*
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You called me a coward for running away from Talon. I think it's a good idea. xD I don't want him killing me, or bitching at me. I get enough bitching from my parents xD
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he doesn't bitch,he only makes some cuttin' jobs >:3
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Oh, in that case. I'd like to have him butcher my cow for me. Let's see here... I want 20lbs of T-bone, 80lbs of ground beef, several 12 Oz ones. 
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If i butcher him I keep all the meat.
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My cow bro -3- I raised the fast ass!
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I mean the pic looks nice. Woke up a while ago.
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Love how you made the background, it fits well with the pose <3
and I adore your Earring, omg..., I have a star earring that I sometimes put on my sona owo"
I hope you can keep up with the good work!
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Thank you for all the nice things you said ^^
and I sure will keep up the work ^^
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no problem <3
and Great! can't wait to see more X3
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heh your welcome xP
and thanks for the watch! Owo
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No problem I'll see where you're going with your art as well ^^
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