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BDStevens β€” Broken Trinity

Published: 2011-12-20 05:55:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 7057; Favourites: 172; Downloads: 295
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Description Took me WAY too long to get to this for a patient and highly talented buddy of mine: .

And doesn't this piece kick a little bit of ass? I mean come on a couple sprinkles of Kryptonite is there any doubt that if it came down to total war that Diana would be the first one to take down the other two?

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JimSandersIII [2011-12-20 06:38:38 +0000 UTC]

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I ,too, like this pencillers work,but don't think this is his strongest work. Some things that stand out that you should work on and consider while inking is that your outlining needes to be more consistent, and your rendering should blend into the blacks a little better. You should also consider your line weights a little more- every thing in the foreground, middleground, and the background have almost the same line weight. You should also work on how you render your hair- a difficult thing for most inkers to learn- i would recommend picking up Andrew Loomis' book, "FIGURE DRAWING FOR ALL IT'S WORTH". It is an excellent book for pencillers and inkers and has a great section on rendering hair in ink.
All that being said, on the plus side you seem to have pretty good control of your tools, and you were very faithful to the pencillers work. I especially like the way you handled Wonder Womans armor.
I guess what it comes down to is: do you want to be an inker or a tracer? An inker adds his/her own knowledge of drawing to enhance a pencillers work- a tracer only gives you back exactly what the penciller gave him. You seem to have the talent to be an inker, not a tracer, so take a few chances next time and don't be afraid to fix the things that you know you could make look better or more convincing- even if it's just background stuff. Keep on slinging the ink, I know you got better work in ya e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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CheekyLombax [2012-08-02 13:53:07 +0000 UTC]

And Wonder Woman's there to pick up the Pieces.

This is incredibly amazing by the way.

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BDStevens In reply to CheekyLombax [2012-08-03 00:32:57 +0000 UTC]

I think Wonder Woman made a lot of those pieces to begin with. Thanks a lot.

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CheekyLombax In reply to BDStevens [2012-08-08 01:42:12 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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Highlander0423 [2012-05-07 05:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Hope you don't mind, but i had to colour this Hope you likie [link]

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BDStevens In reply to Highlander0423 [2012-05-10 03:50:51 +0000 UTC]

nice work. Thanks for the heads up!

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Highlander0423 In reply to BDStevens [2012-05-10 12:30:50 +0000 UTC]

NP dude, glad you like.

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thelearningcurv [2012-01-22 22:31:29 +0000 UTC]

good choice of art to work on=]

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BDStevens In reply to thelearningcurv [2012-01-23 01:36:47 +0000 UTC]

agreed

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damzo [2012-01-16 12:10:12 +0000 UTC]

You are very talented my friend, your inks over icicle are just fantastic

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BDStevens In reply to damzo [2012-01-17 03:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much.

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orabich [2012-01-03 13:12:58 +0000 UTC]

great work!
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BDStevens In reply to orabich [2012-01-04 00:51:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, and for the faves as well.

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tkon04 [2011-12-27 22:48:57 +0000 UTC]

There are artwork that looks Great only in pencils/ink sans color and 'Broken Trinity' Boldly epitomizes it perfectly, a very Powerful thought provoking piece, I definitely like the Awesome details in this chaotic aftermath scenery with a Triumphant Wonder Woman draping a beaten Superman across her shoulders like a grand-prize trophy with a fallen Batman at her feet. Nice touch on the subtle fusion of her iconic outfit with her 'DCnu' version carrying an unconscious Superman minus the unsightly collar he's sporting in the 'nu-verse' I'm definitely Fav-ing this. Props to BDStevens. Well Done!

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BDStevens In reply to tkon04 [2011-12-28 02:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. Be sure to stop by and fave the pencils as well.

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mbembet [2011-12-22 01:52:30 +0000 UTC]

threesome!!!

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BDStevens In reply to mbembet [2011-12-22 06:25:42 +0000 UTC]

yeah... not touching that.

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ArkanoArt [2011-12-21 17:50:01 +0000 UTC]

sheΒ΄s the best!!!!

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BDStevens In reply to ArkanoArt [2011-12-22 01:07:54 +0000 UTC]

agreed!

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theaven [2011-12-21 13:55:26 +0000 UTC]

wouldn't the title make more since if Wonder Woman was shown defeated alongside her male allies

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BDStevens In reply to theaven [2011-12-21 15:58:48 +0000 UTC]

How about "A Trinity of One"

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JimSandersIII [2011-12-21 04:19:28 +0000 UTC]

sorry-in my critique i named the right book but wrong author-it's jack hamm not andrew loomis=my bad

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BDStevens In reply to JimSandersIII [2011-12-21 05:16:19 +0000 UTC]

Don't see any critiques pending. Would love to hear your thoughts though.

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JimSandersIII In reply to BDStevens [2011-12-21 05:21:27 +0000 UTC]

well, i wrote one late last night-its showing on my page that it posted but that I have to get a premium membership to join the discussion in the commnts section----thats weird

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BDStevens In reply to JimSandersIII [2011-12-21 06:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Comments are free. Apparently critiques cost extra.

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JimSandersIII In reply to BDStevens [2011-12-21 06:20:21 +0000 UTC]

i'm hoping to get a membership soon----

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LordBabeskull [2011-12-20 09:14:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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BDStevens In reply to LordBabeskull [2011-12-20 17:58:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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devgear [2011-12-20 08:46:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! Ace is on a roll I was thinking this was the one you might be working on...Nice work!
I have my own thoughts on this one...Supes being the lush he is, got into yet another drunken brawl, leaving himself and the establishment destroyed; is being carried home by his devoted love again! Or maybe not

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BDStevens In reply to devgear [2011-12-20 17:58:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm definitely intrigued by your version of events, not gonna lie.

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Ace-Continuado In reply to devgear [2011-12-20 16:23:18 +0000 UTC]

Tha Hangover 3.

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BDStevens In reply to Ace-Continuado [2011-12-20 17:58:07 +0000 UTC]

"Too Much Party - Go Sleep Now."

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devgear In reply to BDStevens [2011-12-20 19:19:58 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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NRGPreview [2011-12-20 07:32:01 +0000 UTC]

Will this be in color soon?

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BDStevens In reply to NRGPreview [2011-12-20 18:01:04 +0000 UTC]

Maybe. I've got kind of a to-do list for the next few days – and of course there's the holidays to contend with.

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NRGPreview In reply to BDStevens [2011-12-20 20:30:13 +0000 UTC]

Take your time!

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SeanE [2011-12-20 07:19:29 +0000 UTC]

*saves the high res*

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BDStevens In reply to SeanE [2011-12-20 18:00:26 +0000 UTC]

*tips hat*

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Ace-Continuado [2011-12-20 07:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Breathtaking, Doug! You have brought life to my pencils here. It's not just the way I'd like it to look. It's far better than I imagined. Thank you so much. You have honored my work every time.

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BDStevens In reply to Ace-Continuado [2011-12-20 18:00:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, man. Glad that you liked it. I found a lot to like about these lines as I was going through them. You keep improving like this and you're going to be scary.

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Ace-Continuado In reply to BDStevens [2011-12-21 02:49:34 +0000 UTC]

I have a looong way to go before I'm considered scary.

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