Comments: 979
The-Max765 [2017-07-04 01:00:14 +0000 UTC]
Sploosh
I love it
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Sohvins [2016-02-28 12:12:16 +0000 UTC]
That's dark dude
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Hiveria [2015-09-30 20:36:48 +0000 UTC]
I love it. So much meaning is such few words
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Gladddragon [2015-03-31 13:33:55 +0000 UTC]
A suicidal man jumps of a cliff and becomes a merman instead of dieng...finds he's better off...lol
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RolllingGirl [2014-03-11 20:01:59 +0000 UTC]
I get it.. This is really creative. Nice work thinking this up, I never would've.
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BearsInUnderwear [2013-10-07 02:10:43 +0000 UTC]
love the creativity i got it!
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TenMilesWide [2013-09-14 03:32:52 +0000 UTC]
is it sad that i understood it without having to think about it?
it's really creative though.
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Captain-Salt [2013-09-01 00:53:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow! That's skill, telling a whole story using only three words. Love it!
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abie1295 [2013-05-23 09:18:15 +0000 UTC]
Haha, nice! I dont get it at first. Only thought something about a guy jumping from a cliff. But still dont get the act. Not until i read the link. :-D .
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lzepplinlove [2013-05-06 18:44:11 +0000 UTC]
minimalistic approach
I likey
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Marmodre [2013-01-14 13:05:40 +0000 UTC]
So damn simple... and I didn't get it.
I'm not going to praize you for your skill with words, or the magic that comes out of this or whatever. I'll praise you for your creativity, your picturesque mind and all that, or something similar to that. I don't know, I'm but a "peasant" among the grand artisteries that is this website! My only companion is the horrendous grammar-ish thing that is my spelling or what-so-ever.
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AkuKumo [2012-12-29 20:14:27 +0000 UTC]
wow thats really good!
How do you come up with that?
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Fiona-Dreamer [2012-09-30 15:30:39 +0000 UTC]
simple but lovely!
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stylestyle [2012-08-27 19:15:08 +0000 UTC]
I almost got it xD I thought the man walked down to the sea and went for a swim xD
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VictimofYFD [2012-07-10 13:55:04 +0000 UTC]
Simple but smart.
I really, really like this.
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Kubuko [2012-07-04 05:32:52 +0000 UTC]
Lovely.
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Karvamato [2012-06-16 16:09:29 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely genius.
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mcr-rox-meh-sox [2012-05-18 08:10:45 +0000 UTC]
This is really beautifully simplistic, visual poetry. My opinion literally means nothing, but good work.
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jaz-lyn [2012-04-24 09:14:33 +0000 UTC]
Bravo.
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this-is-a-paradox [2012-04-19 01:40:21 +0000 UTC]
WHOA. This is simple but epic at the same time. I love the clever use of white space to show actual distance. That is so awesome.
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bosslady312248 [2012-03-15 00:40:36 +0000 UTC]
this. is. so. AMAZING! it's so simple- yet so deep!! i LOVE it!!!
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Beaple In reply to gem-gem-gem-gem-gem [2012-02-07 07:41:22 +0000 UTC]
lol - I don't know how I feel about this piece anymore.
It's almost three years old. I feel like it did what I wanted it to do, but that I could've done more with the concept. Instead of returning to it, though, I just barreled on through to something else, like I always do. ~thisdemonblack did a GREAT job of taking a step further, I think, with this piece: [link] . He did a couple of others in that "style", which was really flattering to me - because when I made it, I thought I might've made a giant pile of shit. I still think I might've made a giant pile of shit. I digress.
My main dA page now FINALLY has more page views than this does.
I'm also glad I got this into the "Experimental/Typography" section before they got rid of that as an option.
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gem-gem-gem-gem-gem In reply to Beaple [2012-02-07 12:17:28 +0000 UTC]
well i like short so i like this.
my poems are getting longer though, i have a few unreleased fledgelings, i think i may submit them places before putting them here though.
if they fly you will know.
i looked back on one piece i used to be so proud of recently.
i look at it now and i cringe a little.
i guess we're growing?
(also i wrote something, i will note you tomorrow, i think it will collab well...)
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Beaple In reply to gem-gem-gem-gem-gem [2012-02-07 19:37:38 +0000 UTC]
Ooh? Where else do you submit?
Growing pains.
(Please send it! Please! I had an idea, which involved you writing something - so this is going well.)
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gem-gem-gem-gem-gem In reply to Beaple [2012-02-07 22:33:49 +0000 UTC]
i haven't submitted anything yet, well nothing has got through...
i'll let you know if things go places
(i'll send it on to you today. it's quite different from my usual style. hopefully it meets what you're thinking!)
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Beaple In reply to gem-gem-gem-gem-gem [2012-02-08 17:13:42 +0000 UTC]
(lol, you keep teasing me with this! Send it!)
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akco [2011-12-09 02:02:10 +0000 UTC]
Amusing.
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Beaple In reply to akco [2011-12-09 05:56:57 +0000 UTC]
lol!!! This comment made me laugh so hard, I snorted.
Amusing, indeed.
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MoonlightWillow6 [2011-11-03 22:49:37 +0000 UTC]
This is probably the most clever and unique pieces of literature I have ever seen.
Excellent job!
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ilyilaice [2011-07-08 18:53:39 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing.
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Mannich [2011-07-08 18:45:15 +0000 UTC]
So poignant, and with only three words.
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Areetala [2011-07-05 20:41:29 +0000 UTC]
wow
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Devin-Shaelyc [2011-07-02 03:08:32 +0000 UTC]
I understood this without even coming to this page, but I think it is just amazing.
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iFallenLeaf [2011-06-13 04:43:10 +0000 UTC]
This is my first favourite on DeviantArt.
It's one of the best poems that I've ever read.
Just sayin'.
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77spawn77 [2011-06-09 20:07:32 +0000 UTC]
Whoa...I understand that...
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VolleyballCutie13 [2011-06-06 20:27:31 +0000 UTC]
so much can be said with just nine words.
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5iveminutes [2011-05-19 12:34:50 +0000 UTC]
like it alot! So simple~ great. I wondered if it would be possible to use this as a tshirt print? I'd love to have a tshirt with this..
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