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Published: 2013-02-04 22:07:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 11078; Favourites: 264; Downloads: 0
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beep boop, more leona updates, not as much time now that im finishing up some freelance work but I always try to keep the personal work churning!feel free to comment as I work on this pieces
or comment here on the LoL forums!
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enjoy!
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I really like her and her design
But i feel her armour is very dwarven (not that, that is a bad thing 
(just realised this was made 2 years ago 
Also i adore your design for the Botanist Norris (but thats even older)Β
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aww thank you! I still love some of my older work 
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I like the mix between the classic plate and the future cyber-punk fell. I tried to do that with a few of my character but pulled it more towards classic plate armor look.
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This is really nice! I like the armor design
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Hell, I like it! But should it be high heels?
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not reaalllly a heel, I larp in shoes like that, its like a riding/boot heel her other shoes have it. I would never give her huge heels!
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XD I often like some boot like military boot. I mean THIS IS SPARTAAAA *kick enemy out of window*
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ermagerd spartan leona! Β
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Sparta Leona style: Feel the sun's glory! *use shield punches enemy out of window*
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Diana is doing bad work... better fix this.
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That's amaaazing yo :3 I actually like how stylish her armor is, and how you added lightshields instead of shoulder armor<3 Great job!
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her mouth/jaw part looks like a mans shaved face...did you intend or is it a artistic accdent?
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ah ah ah THAT MASK/HELM! omg I want xD I have to say that I really love this color pattern, I even like it more than the last version! Great job on that 
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She has a realy masculine face, but other than that great as usual.
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do they really feel that masculine? I think right now they are strong.. but maybe its just me hehe
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To be honest I can't put me finger on exactly what it is but I am definitely getting manly vibes from her face.
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I guess... I dont mind the manly.. if anything the actual leona has way too much makeup for my tastes
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Well I certainly wouldn't add cleavage just to make her more feminine so I'm glad you didn't do that but perhaps she could benefit from a bit more of a chest now that you mention it, it's totally flat as-is and that might be making her look a bit masculine too, a few things I could suggest would is that her face is a bit rectangular, maybe pull in her cheeks a little she also has a pretty hefty chin and nose bridge which might not be helping.
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ah i could see lowering the part that meets her brow, just to drop the brow back juuusssst a bit, and maybe a little more plump face
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I see you took a different direction and took less of a tech approach. I feel like more could be done on her helm; not the part that covers the face but what goes out back behind her head. Floating / digital / holographic pieces could be used to add a bit of zest.
The hexagonal approach you took with the arms doesn't match up with the shield in my opinion. I see you wanted to go for a winged design but in the process hid most of the hexagonal design at top of the shield. Doesn't match as much anymore; just my opinion though. Keep the wings on the shield design; but add more hexagonal designs near the bottom of it?
I don't think the bottom half of the outfit has been completed so I won't critique on it. A few ideas though; maybe throw in some awesome LED design that would light up when her W is active? Knee high or higher armored bottoms that match the torso?
Don't think the sword if finished either so I won't critique it. Idea though; match design with shield? Have a winged LED where the hilt is?
Best of luck on your design. Hope I helped in some way; excited to see the next design phase.
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just finished reading all your comments, and yep! spot on, Im thinking about taking the hex texture and making that part of the materials of her clothes more maybe? and working more of the wing led designs in?
thanks again for all the comments and yep! shes still super rough
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Sounds like a plan. Best of luck again.
You could incorporate the hexagon designs in rubber / latex / bendable material. Mostly thinking of material that would be skin tight. Add a bit of shine to it for a spot on detail.
Any ideas on where you would want to put the Wing Decals at?
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i could see something along the back, or have something that stood off the body in the winglike shape? Maybe incorporate it into some kind of arm extension or into the blade of the sword? either way I def think stuff needs to be smooshed around, and painting will always help work those things out! again, great comments and thanks so mcuh for the intense crit, good feedback is hard to come by
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Forgot to throw this out there on my last post. The face seems a tad bit masculine. I also understand that her design is to be a very independent tank female. She could still use a hint of cleavage though in some way.
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In her original art she still has her breasts shown through plate armor. Try going for that? It would make her "Leona" per say; not manly man woman tank.
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Once again, awesome work
Do you have any exercise you would recommend to improve? Lately on my days where I don't have freelance work I tend to scribble nothingness for a few hours just trying to figure out what to do. I wind up wasting a lot of time that I would rather spend being productive. Any suggestions would be awesome
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