Comments: 12
WorldWar-Tori [2010-07-28 23:05:37 +0000 UTC]
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I love the concept of this piece, it's quite lovely, and not something I've seen very often around dA. That right there gives a good feeling towards it.
The biggest suggestion I have is if you moved a little to the right, so the entire thing was right in the center. Also, if you could have moved your camera down a little to get the whole thing under the lily pads.
Maybe (and I'm not sure if this would have worked or not), if you had zoomed in a little bit you would have caught more of the reflection, but that's just a maybe.
Those things aside, I love the colors. I love how vivid the pink is, and how it's solely there, there aren't any around to be seen. It works very nicely with how bright the green is. It's quite lovely.
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(((please do not focus on the stars, the critique is what I wrote.)))
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nikki286 In reply to beckabue [2010-08-20 03:17:33 +0000 UTC]
you are welcome
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Mirrei [2010-08-04 15:49:20 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic photography.
Did you get in the water to take the picture?
What camera did you use?
But very lovely and vivid.
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beckabue In reply to Ancient-Hoofbeats [2010-08-04 04:46:08 +0000 UTC]
It is a "slice of life" and it is also undercover. I am sorry you don't like it but you don't have to be rude either. I wish you good luck in the contest with the ones you have entered.
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