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Description Vo is an original character I'm working on Fighting game Project dubbed "Guts and Glory". I didn't start this project, I'm a late comer. She is still in the early design stages, but I thought I'd post her to see what people think. Here is a link to a few other combatants in the roster. theamericandream.deviantart.co…

It is not a Sci Fi based game, we have characters of all kinds.

Not much on Vo's story has been officially decided. But, Vo isn't a woman you want to cross. She once worked for a woman of cruel intentions as a scientist, developing technology and weaponry for her. However, she wasn't working fast enough to please her master. To hasten her progress, her master infused a formula that would cause her to slowly, but surely gain weight. The intent was to increase her determination to find a way around the physical barriers of immense body weight.

But this only caused Vo's temper to turn on her former leader. She has since decided to claim war against her old faction, and now works on her own. Still a scientist, she looks for a cure to her condition, while her new body suit slows the process. She may no longer be in league with the enemy, but Vo isn't exactly one to harbor friends either.

Artist's Note: This character is still in development, and I am interested in comments of what others think of her design. I'd prefer them to be nice, but please let me know what you think of her. Thanks for viewing!

Also, keep in mind, this character isn't designed with LOADS of logic, mostly fan service. So, I'm aware her outfit doesn't make that much sense. It isn't supposed to!

Personality-We'll see
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Comments: 46

jeagerjack [2010-01-17 19:13:10 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


This drawing shows that you are capable of drawing a wide range of characters and styles, and drawing them all well. This is a large shift from the regular characters we see of yours who have more of a real world quality to them (aside from the obvious theme) and yet you made it seem like you had been drawing it all along.

The character design itself is very well done, the body isn't too large and in an odd way actually makes her seem more active, almost like she's battle tested. I don't know if it's the way she's holding herself or just the fact that her attitude shows off that she can trudge forward despite her weight, but her size actually makes her seem tougher because of it. And I think the hair was an excellent design, it was sci-fi in it's size and shape (and also color obviously) but yet it still seemed based enough on reality that it could be a real hair style.

Now the clothing/armor is the main point of interest in this pic in my opinion. You were able to show signs of the classic sci-fi armor, but at the same time you applied a sleek and original design to it that made it your own. The shoulder pads are an excellent example of how you are taking a regular concept from sci-fi armor, but with the colors and shape really made them feel new. Also the boots are fantastic. Their shape is both feminine yet still mechanical to give it that sense of the future, and because of her size it makes it seem like she would have no problem holding up her figure. And as always you put tons of little details in her armor, such as the red strips, the blue lights, and I love the lines in her glove that trace her hand's shape but at the same time creates the symbol for "omega." An excellent choice.

The only thing I would really critique, and its small, is that the part of her armor around her waist, the black strip, could maybe be a little larger and darker. The only reason I'm saying this is because at the angle you have her standing, at first when I saw it I thought it was part of the shadow from her gun. But in all honesty it's probably fine just the way it is because if the shadows hadn't been already building around that point I would have noticed it just fine.

This is an amazing looking character and I'm glad to see you trying new things to fully show off how creative you are. I really look forward to where you will go with her next.

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HardCoreCrocomire [2016-10-04 01:41:17 +0000 UTC]

I love her ;;w;;

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LucasDArts [2011-11-20 20:11:48 +0000 UTC]

I like how you did the character. Nicely done.

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Xanegoh [2011-03-15 20:17:48 +0000 UTC]

who cares if the outfit doesn't make sense, that's what makes fanservice so awesome.
let's hope she never finds the antidote.

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Dolluan25 [2010-08-08 15:21:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm here and late! (Hey I'm three weeks new) I hope you don't mind me critiqueing this. Actually I hope you like my critiques. Do you
Vo hmm... Vo. Don't be mad at me for saying this, but I hope you don't find an anitdote. Sorry Vo I like the weight gain formula. The suit. I actually think it looks appropiate (and some what nice). She's in a race against time and needed that suit for her situation. She had to rush to finish it couldn't care for its apperance. Or you could call it a prototype. It can actually look nice if some parts was her hair shade of blue.(An alt. suit maybe) Vo's apperance is matching her bio. She looks like someone that lives by "a bullet before words." (Or lazer in her case) Okay being distracted by her thighs.(just saying) I find that well sexy and nice to her bio. (Wait should've keeped that to myself. Might as well be honest. Yes "SEXY!") She's slowly productive so big thighs slows her down. (I take she isn't going to be fast in the game. Also her boss should thought about "Bigger thighs is going to make her slower.") A stomach that is big and soft looking. I see the formula didn't affect her breast much. (sniff*sob*. WHY !!!!!! I'm okay. I'm cool really. In a game you need variety) I like the her story. Addresses why she's... bitter alot.
Rating 5's
Side Note; Can't wait to play with her. You have a talent for making stories. (Even though hers is undecided)

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mattmattart [2010-04-21 11:35:07 +0000 UTC]

whoa. this is a lot of awesomeness.

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VigilCat [2010-02-21 11:24:53 +0000 UTC]

Man! I've dug your work before (like Bianca!)
really quite fantastic (and Muffin tops galore!)

Thank you for expanding (hehee pun) this genre (well... it's not really a genre-- yet!)

Beautiful character, I'm digging the fan service- gracias!

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ZeroConfidence [2010-01-20 05:29:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very interesting character indeed. Very amazing artwork as well. Ha ha!

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BedBendersInc In reply to ZeroConfidence [2010-01-20 05:31:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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ZeroConfidence In reply to BedBendersInc [2010-01-20 05:40:04 +0000 UTC]

No problem. Ha ha!

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cleckwerk [2010-01-19 12:21:46 +0000 UTC]

quite a spectacle

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ghostofthevoid [2010-01-19 06:18:17 +0000 UTC]

The shape is lovely, no complaints.

The outfit bugs me slightly in that the black gloves don't quite fit with the rest of it. I'm sure they match with the bottom piece, but since you can see so little of it it comes off awkward.

Still, it's pretty great, that's just my take on it. I'm looking forward to the game.

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TheHereticMike [2010-01-18 17:47:12 +0000 UTC]

O_O very nice. Regardless of her "Proportions" the way you drew her and had her colored is awesome.

Her face looks very "sexy/sleek" kind of way. Something like Darkstalkers artwork if you will (Not IN GAME I'm talking like the artwork they do before).

Although I think you could have gone more into detail on the weapon, it looks pretty plain, but because of the creativity, I dont know if that NEEDED more detail.

I have to ask though, Are you ready for Mass Effect 2?

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Superjustinbros [2010-01-17 17:32:53 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic job.

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hocuspukeus [2010-01-17 14:28:49 +0000 UTC]

I really Like her story. it reminds me when i did this little character battle project started by one of my instructors at school. I used my ninja character Kyodai in it except she was implanted with a chip that made her gain weight if she failed any mission which would induce her to become desperate and go on a fighting frenzy just to please the uppers.

As far as design is concerned it's very sci-fi mercenary like. I love it. I like how her fat is trying to squeeze out showing that she is indeed gaining weight. Her outfit is really cool.

I'm tempted to draw her now.

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BedBendersInc In reply to hocuspukeus [2010-01-17 18:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Go for it.

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hocuspukeus In reply to BedBendersInc [2010-01-17 18:54:14 +0000 UTC]

will do!

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Deftministry117 [2010-01-16 23:20:43 +0000 UTC]

I don't think I've seen the thighs and butt illustrated to hang over boots with so much appeal.. Very cool and unique to me!

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psionicninja2000 [2010-01-16 21:08:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm loving those thunderous thighs but that goes without saying.
She certainly has potential as a character. Well, I can't offer much imput without knowing more about this project. I can tell it's fat chick sci-fi, but without knowing more...
Meh, a minor dig against the picture is that it's not entirely clear what she's supposed to be beyond "generic space babe." Soldier (going on the image, not the biography) doesn't work due to the lack of armor or shield device. The biography says she's a scientist (which has a lot more leeway in dress code so I'll just can my discussion about a "practical" soldier's outfit,) so would she have some kind of scanner (either a hand held or wrist mounted device) or personal computer on her person for quick notes or readings?
My two cents, take them as you will.

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GunnDancer [2010-01-16 16:06:21 +0000 UTC]

Well since I don't have the money to upgrade to premium to make a critique, I'll place it here. It's not bad at all though:

I really like the design. I think it's really good and it fits well with the feel of a sci fi look. I think the only thing I would add in a revamp would be maybe cover the exposed flesh with a body suit.

Now before people riot hear me out, because I love the exposed parts probably more than most:

For a couple of reasons... one, you always want some form of armor covering your midsection. In a world of guns that is the easiest place to shoot.

And two, in my mind if she designed a suit to slow the process, it seems it might make sense if it were a form fitting mesh inlaid with a grid of some kind to delay the weight gain.

Just a couple of thoughts! Otherwise it looks amazing!

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psionicninja2000 In reply to GunnDancer [2010-01-16 23:19:03 +0000 UTC]

I see I am not the only one with these thoughts. Thank you.

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koolaide-kill-you [2010-01-16 14:59:41 +0000 UTC]

I love her proportions. A lot. However, I think you should make a pic featureing her before her "condition".

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BalloonPrincess [2010-01-16 11:27:51 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work! Looking forward to seeing more of her!

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manji-luo [2010-01-16 11:16:07 +0000 UTC]

not bad, but the name Vo has already been used, in case you didn't know xD

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she still looks pretty unique though! good job on it

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Mosherness2 [2010-01-16 08:07:39 +0000 UTC]

Vo Vo VOOOM!

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boxeater5 [2010-01-16 07:44:00 +0000 UTC]

She.Is.Gorgeous!!!! Don't change a thing, she is perfect as is, the figure, her hair, those cool sci-fi robot boots, absolutely fantastic! I am VERY interested in her and would love to see more. Just WOW

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GizesNumbers [2010-01-16 07:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Guys don't make passes at girls with huge guns. At least, if they wish to live until tomorrow.

I wonder what'd happen if/when she outgrows her body suit...

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KonekoRyu [2010-01-16 06:28:55 +0000 UTC]

O_O impossible! I thought I was the only one with a character named Vo!

@_@ helluva figure on her, though o_o

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BedBendersInc In reply to KonekoRyu [2010-01-16 06:29:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry! Didn't know the name was taken. I'll give her a last name maybe.

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KonekoRyu In reply to BedBendersInc [2010-01-16 12:09:55 +0000 UTC]

once she's fully developed, I think I'mma haveta draw her.... yes..... >:3

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KonekoRyu In reply to BedBendersInc [2010-01-16 06:34:36 +0000 UTC]

XD I'm jokin' it's no big, I have characters unintentionally sharing the same name with other characters. if nothing else, it'll make for an interesting future pic ^^

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J-P1 [2010-01-16 06:18:22 +0000 UTC]

Very stylized and comic book like. Nice.

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Basmalo [2010-01-16 05:48:16 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Talk about Thunder Thighs!

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Daxer8-1 [2010-01-16 05:25:54 +0000 UTC]

Great looking character and story, I think you should go ahead with it.

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Loki-Ascendant [2010-01-16 05:13:38 +0000 UTC]

I <3 her forceful stride+ how she's bulging outta her thigh-highs. Very...aggro, rageful, even without the description.
Also? Ridiculously hawt

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Barkis1 [2010-01-16 05:07:45 +0000 UTC]

Looks very nice, personality-well see.

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MUMN [2010-01-16 04:46:48 +0000 UTC]



I love this picture so much

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MUMN In reply to MUMN [2010-01-16 04:48:37 +0000 UTC]

Also, the character seems so likable, I look forward to seeing alot more of Vo

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Uglymuffintop [2010-01-16 04:31:51 +0000 UTC]

That muffin top plus the thick thighs and butt multiply that by sheer tantalization equals quite the intriguing character design.

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pat-brown [2010-01-16 04:18:54 +0000 UTC]

lovely

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crabman1 [2010-01-16 04:17:33 +0000 UTC]

Vavoom meets Kaboom, I take it?

I like the way that the tightness of her boots(?) imply that she's ready for battle and isn't pre-occupied with comfort, and the silver colors compliment her skin tone very well.

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Nexis89 [2010-01-16 03:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow, she really came out looking fantastic 8D The shine on her body armor and skin, along with the shadow effects, and the body type itself is fantastic as well. I'm looking forward to seeing more of her, and perhaps more revamps in design too

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mause124 [2010-01-16 03:48:44 +0000 UTC]

very nice work i beleive the story is fascinating and has much potential .. though i must ask.. who would want something like that cured?

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Iced-Equestria [2010-01-16 03:35:14 +0000 UTC]

wow shes awesome ^^ what a nice shape <3

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Mastamindtaker [2010-01-16 03:29:16 +0000 UTC]

She's quite the hottie, but I am afraid to see what would happen if I try to make a move on her right away...

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salamanderFLAME [2010-01-16 03:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, lovely job.

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