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been-training-dogs — Do something brave. [NSFW]

Published: 2005-06-27 16:43:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 123; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description A man without skin,
Rolls over and stares at a single blade of grass.
His eyes follow a thousand insects that move at the speed of thought,
Orderly, patiently, they enter his body,
Gnawing thru flesh.
Devouring from the inside out.

He tries not to recall the time,
He held his wife’s dripping dish-cloth face.
Slipping thru his fingers and to the carpet.

Her lover laying, chest open on the bed,
Puncture holes seeping blood –
Oh, so much blood,
As if there was little else.
Everywhere saturated like a twisted Pollock.
His face, the same expression of horror as when the door burst open.
The stench of sex unmistakable.

Do something brave, do something stupid.
Do something.

The skinless man,
Raw and obscene,
Rips into their bodies –
Hysterical, screaming,
A face mask of tears and sinew.
The couple no longer resemble anything close to human.

Y’see, insects are perfect.
They know very little of the evils of man –
War, hatred, rape, lies, deceit, jealously, greed, prejudice.

I wish I was an ant.
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Comments: 10

mirrormaul [2005-12-03 02:01:02 +0000 UTC]

YEAH!! but if you were an ant you couldn't write poetry like this...

very well written, I enjoyed, it fills me with a sense of giddy passion

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been-training-dogs In reply to mirrormaul [2005-12-03 17:15:09 +0000 UTC]

lol good point, i'd have to hire a human to write for me

many thank yous

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maleficx [2005-07-08 17:48:37 +0000 UTC]

i love reading what your write. i will definitely be checking in more often.....

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been-training-dogs In reply to maleficx [2005-07-08 18:26:50 +0000 UTC]

hey ya , thanks that's really cool.

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Sleeping-Elf [2005-07-06 23:36:47 +0000 UTC]

Fuckin awesome andy, you get stronger with every piece you write... never stop

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been-training-dogs In reply to Sleeping-Elf [2005-07-07 05:57:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much , cheers for the fave
i was thinking that it might be a little too fucked up for some people lol...

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Sleeping-Elf In reply to been-training-dogs [2005-07-07 22:06:50 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, I loved it

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been-training-dogs In reply to Sleeping-Elf [2005-07-08 06:00:38 +0000 UTC]

x forever .........

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fallen-princess [2005-07-01 03:01:35 +0000 UTC]

that gave me chills - very powerful

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been-training-dogs In reply to fallen-princess [2005-07-01 05:56:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you
i think it's the most graphic poem i've written, i was worried that people would be a bit disturbed.

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