HOME | DD
been-training-dogs — Funny guy
Published: 2004-12-28 12:34:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
Redirect to original
Description
Congratulations – you’re sick, bleeding behind the eyes,You’re sick – just like the rest of us,
Just like everyone else.
Well done, you’re a funny guy.
Congratulations – you’re sick, dead in the ears,
Dead in the chest, cold in the heart.
Well done.
Make sure to die quietly,
I’d hate for you to ruin my day,
To leave me thinking about how things could have been better between us.
Shut the door on your way out.
When you’re gone,
I’ll just lie here on my back and watch the sky burn,
The dancing flames a thousand feet above form faces that recoil.
Comments: 6
beautiful end to sarcasm lol. i love the sarcasm though, probably because i employ it so regularly myself (not usually in my poetry though), and i like its subtlety. great work
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
lol thanks 
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
too right! don't know where i'd be without sarcasm really!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
i'd be lost without it, it'd mean i'd have to start acting nice haha!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
woah that was a quick response lol! yeah i know what you mean, i'd like to think i'm reasonably nice (*shifty eyes*) but man, do i love sarcasm! thanks so much for commenting on my work and for the watch!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
lol yeah i've got my eyes glued to this screen.
likewise, cheers for the watch and your comments
👍: 0 ⏩: 0