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Published: 2013-10-09 09:24:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 2254; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 0
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Hi there.Wanted to draw some Predator a little diffrent than my usuall.
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I am indecisive. I have been looking at this one and the "Hate pred. happy hunting" and tried to figure out which one is better drawn. Dont get me wrong, they are both great in their own way but together they have differences and similaritys that compliments them.
This one you have alot of details with black pen, but you have also added a bit of shading with pencil and that - in my opinion - helps the drawing alot. Because of all the details in black pen, the drawing gets very mottled. Some parts blend into each other and creates a questionmark of what is what. And that is a shame because it is a great drawing with wonderful detailed armour and characters.
The other drawing, "happy hunting", also has a lot of details but is alot more easy to view. It has more air and doesnt drown the same way in ink that this one does. And that makes me like it more then this one, even though this one has "more" in it.
Maybe of this one was coloured it would be easier to view. You could try to add darker shading on parts that is not as important as parts that are up front and vital to the picture to be understood.
If my words are a load of bullshit, then so be it. I have given you a (hopefully) constructive critique and you can take it as you like.
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Well Thanx for the critique
I agree-this one looks like what the hell am i looking at kinda thingie.
On paper it looks way more clearer.
The spots on this one were "filled" with darker pen i make the outline of ewerything and on happy hun I did the filling with thinner one i make smaller details.
Am trying new things to make drawings more ..how to say it-one diffrent from another.
Am gonna experience some with shading some time in the future works.
again Big Thanx For creative critique
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Yeah that's the problem with some drawings, that it can look clear and good in person but later you see that it isnt when in computer. I have trouble with my own drawings and sometimes its just a mess and I dont know what to do! It is a learning curve to balance what is important and what is not.
Its good that you are trying new things and making the drawings look different from each other. That is probably the only way to see if one is making a progress or not. Have you worked any more with shading? The one drawing that your girlfriend coloured, the black pen along with her colours works really well together. Maybe try that again?
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Real neat, I could tell there is a flink of change in this deviations compared to the others, but I like it.
Always love when ever you draw Hate.
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Next one gonna be more detailed-The work Ronnie solano did-he drew Hate on lava planet-i think i will draw Hate killling the lava creature that melted half his mask-need to draw some static works before finishing the last stand of Hat'y.-creature not made out of melted rock,but more like something that is capable of surviving and living in lava,vulcan enviroment
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That all sounds so hard core, really looking forward to it.
And the volcanic environment should be a challenge, even though a screenshot of the predator planet revealed in the "AvP:R" movie reveal the Yaut'ja has mastered the ability to harness and control rivers of lava.
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Awesome as usual. Presume his final stand is still being finished?
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"being" ...Yeaaaah...riiiiggghhht 
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thanx,next one gonna be more detailed...i think
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Your welcome and kool
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