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hexzyle [2013-08-13 11:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Additionally, the stones at the bottom lack a 3D shape. They appear to be rectangular, but the large amount of shading on the right hand side betrays this. (at least, to my memory of how shading works)
You could either minimize the shading, or turn the pyramid at the bottom into a circular arrangement by adjusting the width of the dividers of the bricks (making the ones at the side thinner)

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hexzyle [2013-08-13 11:21:06 +0000 UTC]

This looks great! Arm length is a tad odd though. (specifically his right, our left) Usually fully outstretched, the wrist reaches to about a 1/3 of the way down the upper leg (or something)
I'm not too knowledgeable about perspective but it looks like you've added an upper curve on the top of the pillar, but none on the top of the "APPOLON" stone that he's standing on. The only explanation I can think of for that is that the APPOLON stone is square-topped, not circular. Was this your intention?

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