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benr1989 — La douleur
Published: 2004-01-31 09:00:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 15
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An angel spoke to me.She told me of the sorrows in the world.
She opened my thoughts,
To true knowledge.
She explained to me of the death.
She taught me of the pain,
Suffered and being, by far too many.
On the gradual scale of life,
Our problems are minimal.
The situation,
although seemingly as horrid as can be,
Doesn’t and can’t, compare to them.
Sea’s of bodies,
Rivers of blood,
Fields of the unburied.
Sanity is a lost hope,
Effort is all which remains.
Pull through.
Fight the war.
Conquer the challenges.
Find your sanctuary.
Open your mind,
Embrace the love.
Disregard the opponent,
Live life to the fullest,
Before you plummet from heaven.
Économiser vous-même.
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Comments: 4
Well it seems poetry-ish and prose-ish, but you are right, it does seem more like prose. It's a big change from your last poem, but I love it just the same.
The concept is really cool, speaking of an angel and such. I love the last stanza+last line. It sums the poem up so well, and gives it a really strong ending. Well, I thought that it seemed very well written. Definately a fav!!!!!!!!!!
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i think i have a fetish or something for the french words... i dont know, i just like them... and im using Google translator so its kinda off, sorry.
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