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BentBack101 [2006-07-14 02:32:41 +0000 UTC]
Thankx everyone!!!......if you guys can believe it that whole thing came together in about 5 minutes. It just kind of came out while i was running from the house to the office in the rain. lol I instanly ran to the computher and opened notepad (cuase it was the fasting thing i could get a hold of) and started typing. ^_^; It was kind of scary actually..........
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xBlackWindDragonx [2006-07-12 22:45:35 +0000 UTC]
very nice, it really is well done, and i love the format you've placed it in ... it looks like it's falling like rain or rolling away
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drowninginadrop [2006-07-12 22:15:19 +0000 UTC]
Rain is amazing. I really like the way you wrote this. Sweet piece.
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WithoutName [2006-07-12 20:59:47 +0000 UTC]
The spacing of the words really adds a great effect to the whole presentation and how the reader reads it.
At least, that's how I percieve it.
Amazing work, lu!
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BentBack101 [2006-07-12 01:47:06 +0000 UTC]
thanks!!! lol for some reason i just like to space out my words XD
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DarkDaria713 [2006-07-12 01:45:09 +0000 UTC]
Wows... That's really good... I like the use of the space button, it gives more of a slow, easy, washing feeling to the poem.
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