Description
Finally got to upload this! This comic is still unfinished due to finishing freelance + finding full time job + BoB Project which I volunteered as a Graphic Designer (and we're in a process of proof and test printing. We're almost going to submitting it to Dreamworks Animation!!). I was planning to submit this in flash but since it's unfinished, I decided to post the pages in scrap so I won't spam messages and will update progressively.
By the way, there are 11 bunnies in the background. I wanted make it like some serious easter egg hunt XD but hnngg what is time. Most of the other rabbits in the background is a reference from their Intimidation Comic (Like the lion chase). I wanted to tag-- but that would give away surprises e7e;
Moon texture came from somewhere in google (which I don't really know which is which )
Cover 01 (YOU ARE HERE)
Cover 02 (Panel/s: 1)
Page 01 (Panel/s : 1)
Page 02 (Panel/s : 5)
Page 03 (Panel/s : 5)
Page 04 (Panel/s : 6)
Page 05 (Panel/s : 7)
Page 06 (Panel/s : 6)
Page 07 (Panel/s : 5)
Page 08 (Panel/s : 6)
Page 09 (Panel/s : 5)
Summary: (excuse the grammar)
Pan was assigned on a mission to distract POSRA by tranquilizing the officers with her fake gun, just so to prevent them from going any further towards the already distressed brigadiers in the area. Three guards, however, caught her before she could head back to the Brigade. She dealt with them using a rather kid-ish tactic.
After escaping from the guards, she encountered one of the injured brigadiers in the area, Felix. Felix was caught up by a team of POSRA and uses Pan as a fake hostage to escape in the building, where the guards are held, much to Pan's dismay. POSRA had a few navigational problem in the dark building and Felix was able to deal with them with drugged daggers. Pan, ignoring Felix's order to signal distress, helped Felix by shooting with her gun.
When POSRA heard the report about Pan, they decided to bomb the building, leaving it into shambles. Felix was able to escape but Pan was trapped inside the building. Two of the guards, however, helped trapped Pan out of the fallen debris. Unfortunately, POSRA caught the guards and identified them, leading them to become fugitives. The reason why they saved her life is because they needed her help to save one of the severely injured guard, who's young and have young family. At first, Pan didn't want to help them but after mentioning his family, she decided to help using the brigade's medical equipments and sends message to Felix that she's alright. This is where she learned that she can use her eyes other than aiming and shooting with a gun, although this cost her eyes greatly and took 3 weeks to recover her eyes.
After all of the commotion, they thought it was over and that being a fugitive didn't seem to trouble the guards much. But when one of the guards heard that his only child, who's bedridden in the hospital, are threatened to take hostage by POSRA, he had no choice but to take his son away from any hospital at all. However, the guard's son needed great medical attention due to being naturally born weak. Again, Pan didn't want to help them, knowing full well of the consequences, but she later decided to help since when she heard that he is his only family left.
She continued to treat the child on a weekly basis, using the brigade's medical equipment for the boy... It wasn't until one of the trumps saw her suspicious activity, endangering her to be banned from the brigade, or worse... Executed.
Comments: 31
penny222000 [2014-12-01 01:09:48 +0000 UTC]
Is this going to be published? cause if it is I'm defiantly buying it :3
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MaekoHikari [2014-11-30 19:29:21 +0000 UTC]
//touches all over
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phantato [2014-11-30 14:59:14 +0000 UTC]
IM LAUGHIGN OS HARD AT MONO OHGM YO D GAGHJDFFCVXG
YOOOO THE STORY YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
no-
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roxie449 [2014-11-29 21:21:26 +0000 UTC]
Ben so far im lovinng this comic story XD hahaha and i love felix and pan more
omg their interactions so funny XD
and this over oAo i love it so much~ X3 hehe lyn and em hanging out XD
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benteja In reply to roxie449 [2014-11-30 01:15:37 +0000 UTC]
hnnggg I wanted to have them some kind of banter-kind of relationship xD while they're not really close, they're pretty comfortable with each other. (although it's kinda weird to put a relationship with your own characters 8'D )
askdlaj I'm glad you like it! I wanted to add Mo but again, what is time :'DDDDD
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roxie449 In reply to benteja [2014-11-30 02:08:43 +0000 UTC]
lol i know what you mean XD its kinda like rping with yourself XD haha but still i love how felix acted //hugs on him
i love his sense of humor XD
i want to rp with them both more >w<
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mitanchuu [2014-11-29 20:41:20 +0000 UTC]
BENTE I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR BACKGROUNDS AND I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOUR COLOURING ALL OVER AGAIN HHHHH
//STROKES ART
and the lion thing omg I can't even
also that story is giving me lots of feelings
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benteja In reply to mitanchuu [2014-12-02 11:22:45 +0000 UTC]
kalsjd thank you mitan!! QQ7QQ
ahahaha I like torturing babbus //smacked so hard
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mitanchuu In reply to benteja [2014-12-03 17:50:54 +0000 UTC]
bess the torturing
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WindTunnel67 [2014-11-29 18:25:44 +0000 UTC]
Nice loving this so far
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jun-hae [2014-11-29 17:30:03 +0000 UTC]
//stares at this forever
Stereo's lion omgosh //crying
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benteja In reply to jun-hae [2014-11-30 01:19:13 +0000 UTC]
It's secretly Stereo's //smacked
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A-Shiyocchi [2014-11-29 16:09:00 +0000 UTC]
THAT FRIGGIN LION
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benteja In reply to A-Shiyocchi [2014-11-29 16:40:44 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed drawing the lion //LAFFS //SMACKED
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songstressneko [2014-11-29 15:45:04 +0000 UTC]
//loves all over this comic
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horyuu [2014-11-29 15:36:11 +0000 UTC]
Give u a medal
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benteja In reply to horyuu [2014-11-29 16:48:30 +0000 UTC]
//doesn't deserve the medal
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horyuu In reply to benteja [2014-12-01 18:06:24 +0000 UTC]
no, take it or i'll cut yo hand
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benteja In reply to horyuu [2014-12-02 11:23:09 +0000 UTC]
ASDLKALSDKASD
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Catrojan [2014-11-29 14:14:03 +0000 UTC]
> STEREO OBTAINED NEW TRANSPORTATION
cat goes
LAFF BENTEEEEEEEEE I SNORT AND CHOKE AND TOO MUCH HUMOR
THAT BACKGROUND THOOOO JFC TEACH ME THE WAY OF THE STREETS
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benteja In reply to Catrojan [2014-11-29 14:19:02 +0000 UTC]
I was laughing the whole time I was drawing Stereo and Mono. I really love that comic aksldjaskd I can't help but add it in the background.
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Toumatoo [2014-11-29 14:13:02 +0000 UTC]
MAJESTIC LION RIDING AND CHASING
YOOOO LOVE HOW YOU DO THE BUILDING
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benteja In reply to Toumatoo [2014-11-29 14:17:58 +0000 UTC]
PFFFT wow you guys got the reference so fast 8'DDDD
Idk just perspective lines + boxes + windows and billboards kalsdj took me a lot of time though and neglected my portfolio
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Toumatoo In reply to benteja [2014-11-29 14:20:29 +0000 UTC]
ASDFKASHFD HAHHA//STARE ALL OVER THE PIC
BUT YOU DRAW IT GREAt, GREAT JOB! SAFasdfasdfasdf
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Bunni-Hime [2014-11-29 14:11:11 +0000 UTC]
THE LION OMGGGFLAJDFKL
flying Mono //chokes
YOOOooooooooooooo so cool yee
otsukareeeeee
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benteja In reply to Bunni-Hime [2014-11-29 14:16:43 +0000 UTC]
HAHAHA THANK YOU. I enjoyed drawing them two ahuehuehue
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