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beretta92 — Goth Girl revised cover sketch
Published: 2003-10-04 15:31:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 3438; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 384
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I like it, but I dont think the body is right..I dunno..im bad with bodies..anyone see anything wrong so I can FIX it? is it too small? cuz I cant fix it anyways cuz I suck at that..lol and ignore the background I just put it there to keep me busy.its goth girl. but shes more..modern. yes.
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nice work! i always like sketches more then the finished work for some reason.
yay!
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O.o
Dude... I have just found my new artistic hero...
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i love this one accually, cause the body is perfect, the hips r real, but sexy, wish i had ur talent
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thats a wicked drawing...have you coloured it??? and if not, can you??? for me, pleeaase!!! i know im just a ghost in the machine, but still...i admire your work...alot
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actually i think i agree with shadixx on the hip problem. thats about it. thats the only real slight problem i can see with it. but im sure by now you've covered your proportions better (seeing as this is an earlier work). is this goth girl a character you love to draw? i have one, but hes a lot different.
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breasts are ok
i love big breasts
the problem is in the hips, too high, you should just bring them nearer to the articulation with the leg
love the rest of it
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The breasts seem to be too big for the body. Ringo nods.
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not really, if that was my design, its yooou who thinks the breasts are too big. buaha..
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I agree with ~ashkeryne. mostly the waist problem. I think it should be shifted out '1/4 boob.' . that should relieve most of the aquardness. great job though. keep it up...
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err... I think the problem lies in teh waist. Lower it. your body isn't long enough whihc is why teh belly button prob landed a little higher than it shold have
other than that she still looks great. boobs are still good
hair and face great as usu
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her right arm looks like its retreating into the background and if that is the case, it looks fine. if not, her bicep should be longer. i happen to think her clavicle is a little too low. her lips are big but that's your style and i think it looks great! keep up the fantastic work!!
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WOW this is great looking I like this revised version looks awsome !!
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dude like the best sketch EVER! i have NO clue why yo bellyachin all tha time " my names Jackie an im a loser. i cant draw.. mememe momomo whin whin" ... you are a GREAT artist... you may need a little polishin an maby some practice... but other than that YOU ROX! if you want to be a better artist branch out more draw random things like desks, tables, chairs, other objects like guns an other wepons... jus get used to drawin the inanimate rather that the peoples an stuf (you are getin that part down pretty good) hey or dont listen to me an continue mopin... what ev... oh an i think the navle COULD move down a tad. her arm is fine its suposed to be like that cuz her right sholder is up, what ev i think it fine the way it is but hey im jus a kid so what do i know?
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*shakes head*, your skill shows through with every new picture you do. I like this one a lot - it has an Aphrodite IX look, with a michael turnerish style. I love your sketchy style - I'd love to color something like this sometime! Since the belly button has been fixed, looks like the pic is perfect now! 
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Wowo great sketch, i think there is nothing wrong with it..
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oh very nice Jackie, I like this alot excellet work.
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Yep, I agree with Ren...just fix that arm up and this will be great. Her curves are damn near perfect...especially those hips 
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Yep, I agree with Ren...just fix that arm up and this will be great. Her curves are damn near perfect...especially those hips
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hehe...which ARM O_O im thinking the one that more exposed..but ya never know.
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haha, yep, the more exposed one. Its really not that big of a deal, I would just make it a wee bit longer.
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I disagree with the bellybutton statement others have made, if this is still the version where it was deemed 'too high' -- women's navels are placed rather high in comparison to males', it looks perfectly accurate to me, right in the middle between the bottom of her boobs and her crotch. *thumbs up*
Her boobs also look fine, most women are slightly uneven anyway -- and because of the way her weight is settled (i.e. leaning on one arm), they're balanced fine and one should be higher than the other, since the muscles of one arm are taut and the other one is relaxed. So issall good.
Her body looks fine to me, the only thing I could suggest to change is her arm, which seems a little short and thin compared to her voluptuous shape. Other than that it's spiffy-super and I like it a lot.
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hm i think she looks good. and i concur with the belly button as well
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I concur with trill-chan - maybe the navel's a little too high...one breast looks a little bigger than the other as well. If you were worried about the shape of the hips, I think they look fine - it's just the way that she's sitting. If someone were leaning like that, their hips would prolly look a lot like that, even if it seems weird to first glance. ^_^
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yeah..lol the belly button I just threw in there..ill lower it..an' wanna know what I need..? those circle stencils..cuz I always have problems with chest sized being the same..lol thanks.
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Ooh, circle stencils...I so want them. I've always had trouble drawing circles, and my dumb doodles show it...
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The only thing that looks off to me is mabey the belly button is too high. Other than that it looks great!
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O___O wow!!! this is AWESOME!!! There's nothing wrong with the body and clothes.. it's awesome!!
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