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Space-Ace-Sco [2012-03-20 21:32:48 +0000 UTC]
The hair textures look amazing. Especially the way the hair contours to the musculature and where the highlights appear really give the figure a solid-looking form. A "cracked, leathery" texture on his muzzle might go a long way in making it blend better with the rest of the drawing. Also, black line around the red part of the eyeball should probably go. Awesome WIP. I'm gonna have Altered Beast nightmares now.
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BernardtheBeast In reply to Space-Ace-Sco [2012-03-20 21:46:12 +0000 UTC]
Ha, sleep well, heheh, but cheers for the critique! I'm not sure if I'll ever get around to finishing this one, but even with the recent works I've been doing, I'm encountering similar situations, and I'll definitely keep my eyes open as to when I can apply those details that you mention! Thanks!!
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BernardtheBeast In reply to MusclefanOZ [2011-12-08 21:22:40 +0000 UTC]
Yessssssssss, they do really stand out. Was thinking that every time I saw them, meant to darken them or sommat. Another problem I'm having is detail--I do the eyes really up-close and personal, and make them look pretty sharp, while hair and stuff tends to come out blurry. Oooh, I just need to keep at it and figure out how to take my time with this stuff.
My biggest flaw is I always want immediate results--and that's not how drawing works, heheh. Cheers for the comment though!
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elkike [2011-12-08 00:31:08 +0000 UTC]
nice shoulders
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BernardtheBeast In reply to elkike [2011-12-08 00:56:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm kind of thinking they're too narrow from the side, or maybe too far forward--but maybe that's just because his back juts out so far. Anywho, cheers for the comment!
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BernardtheBeast In reply to StarGamerWorld [2011-12-07 23:46:01 +0000 UTC]
Yeeeeah, think the lineart is hiding the hair details. If I get rid of it, the hair becomes more jagged and apparent, but when I apply my line art, the edges lose that jagged hair-like style...meh, just need to improve my style and find a source of patience.
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