HOME | DD

berseh — Elaine's quest 1/01 [NSFW]

#bartnel #cover #female #story #berseh
Published: 2018-11-28 15:34:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 9875; Favourites: 88; Downloads: 230
Redirect to original
Description


Story by


Art by    


NEXT:

Mature Content


Related content
Comments: 57

berseh In reply to ??? [2023-04-30 14:30:51 +0000 UTC]

👍: 2 ⏩: 1

Herod-U In reply to berseh [2023-05-01 00:39:26 +0000 UTC]

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

lexi-tink [2019-06-06 13:34:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, that expression!  I think this is going to be an exciting story indeed!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to lexi-tink [2019-06-06 13:39:45 +0000 UTC]

Awww, lexi? Welcome to this (ongoing) story! I must warn you, this is not the lightest I wrote...

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

lexi-tink In reply to berseh [2019-06-06 13:52:11 +0000 UTC]

It's okay.  I can handle it! ((I think))

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

DarkFall16 [2019-02-03 14:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Very well done cover I really like this  the expression on her face is priceless
looking forward to another great story by you    

👍: 0 ⏩: 2

batgirl1969 In reply to DarkFall16 [2019-04-03 12:26:47 +0000 UTC]

It is also Tina's!!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

berseh In reply to DarkFall16 [2019-02-03 14:50:00 +0000 UTC]

gives great expressions to his characters. It's one of the things that make some of his images so erotic.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

mach-zer0 [2019-02-02 17:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Love this image!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

DamnedComic [2018-12-23 16:21:47 +0000 UTC]

Outstanding!

So glad you are doing this!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to DamnedComic [2018-12-25 16:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you DC. I hope you will like the following pages. (I'm confident you'll appreciate 's artwork)

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

jerry001 [2018-12-18 00:25:54 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful character


👍: 0 ⏩: 0

belzaph [2018-11-30 07:01:09 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful opening

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to belzaph [2018-11-30 12:20:15 +0000 UTC]

All credits go to . In this page my input was only in the title. I hope you'll follow through.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

belzaph In reply to berseh [2018-11-30 12:28:43 +0000 UTC]

i am coming and going at the moment. having a break and such but i will check it when i do pass by. I know that sounds strange but if i am not in the mood DA seems along way away or a better analogy would be walking up to my house. i have the key and walk up to the door peer through the window . think anout entering . pause, sigh  and turn away again and walk away 

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Bhr3730lhp [2018-11-29 10:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Some commenters have noticed her worried , apprehensive facial expression . Ladies & gentlemen, if you go through his gallery you'll see why she looks that way ! This girl gets into the most outrageous, dangerous adventures that can befall a beautiful girl ! 

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

BartNel In reply to Bhr3730lhp [2018-11-29 12:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Hey Bhr , you may be right ... but THIS is not the same story than what I already put in my gallery . A good actress can play in more than one movie, no ?

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

menatv [2018-11-29 07:57:15 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful face.  Has a worried look about her.  Should she be?  


👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to menatv [2018-11-29 13:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Weather forecast promised clear sky, pleasant temperature levels, so what could go wrong?

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

andy1pandy [2018-11-29 06:18:46 +0000 UTC]

She looks worried and beautiful. A good start!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to andy1pandy [2018-11-29 18:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Worried? Nah, everything's fine.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

mahashiva001 [2018-11-29 00:14:10 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful image--I just love that face and the poignant expression.

And for your part...very intriguing story so far.  

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to mahashiva001 [2018-11-29 13:55:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you enjoy the incredible dialogues, twists and characters I've already put in this cover  

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

mrhungry56 [2018-11-29 00:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Ominous! Looking forward to seeing more of these two.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to mrhungry56 [2018-11-29 18:14:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you mrhungry, much obliged.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

TawnyT [2018-11-28 23:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful starting image ... it makes really curious and I am curious

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

LmAnt [2018-11-28 20:10:10 +0000 UTC]

Ah, it's him!

Just recently there was a very similar project of him together with SilkRoad57 , right?

Not much words yet to let you know something about, though

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to LmAnt [2018-11-28 21:33:59 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what their projects were.

👍: 0 ⏩: 2

LmAnt In reply to berseh [2018-11-29 04:55:39 +0000 UTC]

I think you can find it on SilkRoad57's page here

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

BartNel In reply to berseh [2018-11-28 22:09:03 +0000 UTC]

It was another story based on some oriental environment... and strange things happening there !
Anyways, the project was cancelled after a while, so it appears useless to talk more about it ...

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

TazLooking [2018-11-28 19:29:02 +0000 UTC]

A lovely woman that looks afraid and, I guess the dark figure behind her has something to do with that!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to TazLooking [2018-11-28 19:46:07 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what she's afraid of.. Everything should be all right  

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

TazLooking In reply to berseh [2018-11-28 21:50:04 +0000 UTC]

My impression of her facial expression!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Laspe [2018-11-28 19:12:35 +0000 UTC]

This looks promising, B. I had a thought that BartNel is the artist who you are collaborating with after seeing your Status Post yesterday.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to Laspe [2018-11-28 19:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, right now it's a great image... I was going to say I had nothing to do with it but I realise that would not be true: has created this cover after we discussed diferent topics, and I see he's getting more involved in our collaboration.

Given it's you I'm adressing, I'll take the liberty to explain the process.

He contacted me with the first (dozens of pages) part of a beautiful series he had created , with a story written by someone else. He wanted to publish a shorter version in DA.

The images were extremely hot, sensual and I like his aesthetics but my role would have been a little that of a second-hand clerk, leaving me very little room for creation.

I started to write and I see now that he's modifying some of the images, and even starts to create specific pictures for my version.

So, maybe I'll be able to enjoy what is so great for me in collaboration: the exchange of ideas, references, aesthetics, humor and moods, etc.

End of the conference.


 You and me meet on many galleries, so I'd be happy to know how you came to figure it was precisely Bartnel.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Laspe In reply to berseh [2018-11-28 23:15:12 +0000 UTC]

I can see how BartNel's work could have inspired you. Same as I understand how he could be inspired to change some of the scenes based on exchange of ideas between the two of you.

To your last point, it was mostly a gut feeling and me seeing your comments to some of BartNel's images and animations.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to Laspe [2018-11-28 23:32:03 +0000 UTC]

Those are sharp shots to remind me why you are a judge.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Sterling557 [2018-11-28 18:22:35 +0000 UTC]

I hope Elaine's first quest isn't to go find a blouse.  

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

typewriter17 [2018-11-28 17:00:28 +0000 UTC]

Awww...  She's already bummed and the story hasn't started???  How much are you paying the poor girl (or not)?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to typewriter17 [2018-11-28 17:55:47 +0000 UTC]

It's called a cover tw. I'm sure even in your schnuckeldorn town you do have a movie hall. They announce movies with posters   that aim to give an idea of what's in the film right? Same here!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

typewriter17 In reply to berseh [2018-11-28 18:06:00 +0000 UTC]

And your point?  If you'd pay the poor girl enough, she'd look much happier

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to typewriter17 [2018-11-28 19:05:51 +0000 UTC]

A lot of girls would give their shirt away only to feature in my stories  

👍: 0 ⏩: 2

typewriter17 In reply to berseh [2018-11-28 22:01:22 +0000 UTC]

lol...  Alas, giving their shirts and bras away appear to be a prerequisite to be in your stories.  (And I am soooo not complaining.)

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to typewriter17 [2018-11-28 22:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Now that I think of it..

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

typewriter17 In reply to berseh [2018-11-28 22:04:22 +0000 UTC]

 

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

jeanettentutu In reply to berseh [2018-11-28 20:03:49 +0000 UTC]

And probably will.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

berseh In reply to jeanettentutu [2018-11-28 21:34:54 +0000 UTC]

Hihi! Much too daring.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

coppola76 [2018-11-28 15:53:11 +0000 UTC]

so adorable start.. I love her expression.

👍: 0 ⏩: 2

berseh In reply to coppola76 [2018-11-28 17:59:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you coppo, but...Tutto il merito è per Nella pagina ho soltanto creato il titolo!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

coppola76 In reply to berseh [2018-11-29 09:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Great artist, compliments BartNel

👍: 0 ⏩: 0


| Next =>