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Published: 2018-12-07 15:15:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 4125; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 159
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Tiahoun’s hand suddenly flew to my throat and grabbed it, almost strangling me as he lifted his arm.
« See you" he repeated." I want see you, nech’i »
I couldn’t believe how strongly I was held! Like a butterfly caught in the tongs of a spider. His grip on my throat was something I had never experienced.
What his strength really meant was awfully clear: This was a one-sided confrontation.. I had no power, no resource against that.
I nevertheless tried to push his hand down but it was like marble. Like burning marble.
« S.. Stop..What..garrgl.. What are you..? » I gasped.
And while his iron fingers forced me to stand on my toes I could feel the other guy’s hands on my hips.
*Oh no please.. No...No...*
I writhed in revolt and panic! I tried to pull away form Tiahoun and face Almaz to shake his hands off me.
They began to whisper. To chuckle.
To moan words I could not understand.
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Maybe cooperation here might be your best bet at this point, seems all other options have been exhausted, in other words my dear, I think your out of choices.
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When two powerful men calmly start to manhandle you, and you're a lone woman in a foreign land... Hope is weak.
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You know how to chose the perfect words.
Fear and Power
perfectly put in scene by BartNel
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Again I am very flattered, and thankful for your attention and kindness.
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Like a butterfly caught in the tongs of a spider..
I like that one!
I like your writing anyway.
In regards to the story, it looks as if history is in deed repeating itself no matter what we do....
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Thank you darling! Any compliment to my writing feeds me. But when it comes from one of my absolute storytellers, it's a feast!
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Without her previous arrogant and frankly rather hostile attitude, things would have gone much smoother.
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Arrogant? Hostile? But I was all the time polite. I just followed him along the corridor.. These guys are just bad guys!
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You probably didn't look at the facial expression on image 1/9. I can only assume that you also didn't pay attention to what is written there : "Be very careful". Both the expression and the words are clearly hostile. In dodgy situations like that, you can't fault people for being extra cautious with an individual behaving like that. Who knows what her intents are? They wouldn't be doing their job if they weren't taking extra precautions.
On top of it, I would point out that despite the protagonist repeated hints that these two gentlemen are up to no good, nothing untoward happened. So, far they only expressed their desire to check this potentially inimical visitor more closely, and began a patting, presumably to make sure that she doesn't, for instance, carry a weapon, a real possibility in such circumstances. I admit that seizing her by the throat might not have been absolutely necessary, but it's relatively understandable if you take into account their probable nervousness, following the veiled threats that she uttered.
I've no doubt that the rest of this story will show that your assumptions are baseless, and that these men will demonstrate that they know exactly how to behave properly with a frightened and defenseless woman entering alone and without backup in the lair of lawless thugs, for the greatest satisfaction of readers.
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How biased can you be? 
You're pretty good at that but I must protest with the highest energy against this mockery of justice! We vulnerable sex objects, will never surrender to such a distorted vision of the truth. Only looking at your gallery says enough: You are a vile slaver, that's who you are!
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That's exaggerated. Some of the women depicted in my gallery submit willingly.
And if you vulnerable sex objects don't surrender to a distorted vision of the truth, you will surrender to something else eventually. In any case, your destiny is sealed. So, what's the point in trying to fight the unavoidable? That's a wise advice that the protagonist of this story should probably follow, even though I suspect, given her apparent quarrelsome personality, that she won't, to her detriment.
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A trapped delicate butterfly, in deed. Let's hope those people she said knew she was there show up soon! Otherwise......it's not looking good for her.
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It was a bluff. Obviously waisted on them.
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I believe that at this stage we should have a cultural and linguistic break: Translation French expressions into English:
« Tomber dans une embuscade » or « Tomber dans un coupe-gorge »
« Se faire prendre à la gorge » or « Se faire prendre en sandwich »
« Se faire pécho » or « Passer à la casserole »
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Pour la casserole on n'y est heureusement pas encore!
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Arguing with them is becoming tougher I admit.
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it is simply a joy and a bit exciting to read your words
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Thank you b4p, Cass my bad smartass friend
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My pleasure you mean [but wonderful] friend
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Now, I am very troubled, judge. Could it be that you understand Amaric?
But yes, you're right. This looks like trouble.
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My assistant Miss Google tells me it’s Amharic, a language spoken in Euthiopia.
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Inspecting "the goods" before selling her into white slavery??
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I'm shocked by this question. This is not at all that kind of story Mister! We're decent people here: Slavery is a thing of the past!
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Sorry, that was intended for B.
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Now Miss White is in real trouble!
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The attempt with the confident look and the hint that one knows where you are probably failed a little. But the attempt was worth it. I think it's time to think about changing the tactics.
... tension raises more and more
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Thank you my love. Is there time enough now to change the tactics as you said? Is it too late? Will Mr. Al Fluz arrive in time to stop them?
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That is a sexy image, and your words B I think capture the panic and terror that must be going through your poor mind at this moment. The iron like grip that not on seizes your throat but creeps into your chest and coils around your lungs and heart. Let's see what happens next.
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Thank you for this comment Vagrant. You are right: Poor mind indeed, unable amid the fear to properly evaluate the danger
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You're hopeless. The story has started long ago! This is the tenth page! Can't you focus on anything that doesn't include bare butt, tits or pussy? You're an animal.
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Thank you! I do remember vaguely that part of the story has already occurred; I just don't remember what exactly happened in that part of the story. In fact, I may not remember much of this part of the story either--until they succeed in getting those highly unnecessary clothes off of you.
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I can't help but admire how focused is your mind.
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Focusing--the key to success.
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Hmm ... there still is some hope that I was not wrong and these ... well ... brutes still just want to "see" you ...
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I don't know. Last time I checked, "seeing" was not "grabbing by the throat".
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It might be just an expedient (as you were neither following their request willingly, nor performing a preemptive strike ...)
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I think they are asking you to dance with them.
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No way I dance with people sweating that much. What would happen to my stainless white garments?
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Don't worry. I think they will be considerate enough to protect your garments by quickly removing them.
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No doubt where this is going!!! It seems Elaine has never experience this situation before!!
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Well, I believe all girls at one point face unwanted interest. So, I'm convinced.. Wait, it's true that this is a bit more than "interest".
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I have discovered that it is more common than I thought. I have discovered not all guys, even "friends" have morals that are the same as mine!!!
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I'm afraid I don't understand what you mean
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