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berseh In reply to ??? [2019-10-29 20:06:00 +0000 UTC]
He's going to eat the floor I stepped on. Just gimme four weeks max.
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ala33 In reply to berseh [2019-10-30 21:29:17 +0000 UTC]
she may not have 4 weeks given that shes refusing it could mean more treatment hahahahahaha
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Laspe In reply to berseh [2017-11-08 16:59:28 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome!
I guess now that you have changed hands, we will find out more about Vadim in the next part.
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Laspe In reply to berseh [2017-11-08 17:59:59 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely!
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mahashiva001 [2017-11-07 06:50:09 +0000 UTC]
Nice, Berseh! Love the sense of clear and present danger in your narrative!
Back in my playing days a sub I was very fond of kept fantasizing about something like this: being lead away by a stranger and left wondering whether it was a brief loan, temporary rental, or permanent sale. I have to admit: I found it pretty appealing, too.
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berseh In reply to mahashiva001 [2017-11-07 14:33:10 +0000 UTC]
Well i can relate easily to this fantasy. Having been lent myself it's a thought that's about impossible not to have lingering in the back of one's mind.
Thank you for your comment, it's good to know you liked my narrative.
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berseh In reply to mahashiva001 [2017-11-08 14:57:43 +0000 UTC]
Peek my dear. Peek.
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Chooroscoe [2017-11-06 18:54:33 +0000 UTC]
And then?! And then?!?! Excellent writing and images! Can't wait to see where it goes
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Chooroscoe In reply to berseh [2017-11-06 20:27:38 +0000 UTC]
If I must *sigh*
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Behemoth2785 In reply to berseh [2017-11-06 22:59:54 +0000 UTC]
There was this one movie I saw recently.. She was captured, by a sick fuck... kept... and then.. maybe this film can help you.. me not, I don't know where you are right now.. in a room, car, need position... try to triangulate his phone...
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typewriter17 [2017-11-06 17:33:28 +0000 UTC]
And Greg turns out to be a major creepazoid. Surprise, surprise. But then, what would you do for excitement if it weren't for "friends" like this??
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berseh In reply to typewriter17 [2017-11-06 18:29:44 +0000 UTC]
A major creepazoid indeed, and now I'm all alone, naked and collared in this place of vice and debauche..
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typewriter17 In reply to berseh [2017-11-06 21:09:00 +0000 UTC]
I bet the Sims' county is looking pretty good right now, huh?
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berseh In reply to typewriter17 [2017-11-06 21:42:23 +0000 UTC]
Sim's county? This awful meeting point of all depravity, debauche and perversity?
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typewriter17 In reply to berseh [2017-11-06 21:45:11 +0000 UTC]
Umm... But they're all on their best behavior, a few NPC's and a couple of people by request, aside.
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Sacron22 [2017-11-06 17:22:04 +0000 UTC]
Well, I can say without fear of contradiction that Vadim is not a gentleman!
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berseh In reply to Sacron22 [2017-11-06 17:29:19 +0000 UTC]
Certainly not. Another one of those goons who made money on people's back (or lower it seems)! But he doesn't know who is taking home as a slave: I'm not giving up yet!
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Sacron22 In reply to berseh [2017-11-06 21:54:09 +0000 UTC]
Your honor lies in your fighting spirit, berseh.
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berseh In reply to TazLooking [2017-11-06 17:27:31 +0000 UTC]
I like your reading, Taz. You're right in the rhythm and the spirit! If I can ever get free, I'll try to make sure that Greg pays tenfold what he just did: whoring me out? no way he gets away with this. Still, the big gorilla is quite a challenge.
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thomvinson [2017-11-06 16:55:36 +0000 UTC]
Wow!
No where to run. . .
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berseh In reply to thomvinson [2017-11-06 17:41:15 +0000 UTC]
Nowhere.. Nobody will help. Nobody cares, and I don't see myslef run naked in the dark streets of this neighborhood.
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berseh In reply to thomvinson [2017-11-06 18:32:02 +0000 UTC]
At least I had a summer coat when I came in.. but I don't expect I could get it back and run away from gorilla Vadim!
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berseh In reply to DamnedComic [2017-11-06 15:55:26 +0000 UTC]
Right. He picks me up like I was on a shelf! Im' no match to his physical strength. Maybe I should try on some other level..?
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Gibert [2017-11-06 15:27:16 +0000 UTC]
Nice one
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berseh In reply to Gibert [2017-11-06 15:49:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Gibert
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Gibert In reply to berseh [2017-11-06 15:52:19 +0000 UTC]
🌹
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myturncoat [2017-11-06 14:46:36 +0000 UTC]
What a great scene. Up close and personal. Just to make sure I do not get distracted by that lovely ass on the left.
Now what was I saying...?
Oh yes:
The expression from both is great, the work on posing the chain by Chemicq even more.
Your story fits the image like a glove.
(somehow I always smile when you look this angry )
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berseh In reply to myturncoat [2017-11-06 15:18:23 +0000 UTC]
It's funny you say that because even IRL many men have seemed -still do- to enjoy my angry outbursts or my pouting moods.
Makes me even more furious!
That's right: the work on the chain is admirable.
I'm very impressed by his pictures of general view -almost his trademark- but like you, I appreciate very much 's closeup. Even more when he depicts interaction between people. He puts the tension, the contrasts very well on the page.
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superheroineslaver23 [2017-11-06 14:31:25 +0000 UTC]
How much does Bersh cost now anyway I’d like to have her for a bit
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