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professorwagstaff [2014-08-23 20:48:41 +0000 UTC]
Excellent job. Great shading.
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GodOfCreation [2014-08-19 01:44:15 +0000 UTC]
GOOD JUST a tie bit more!
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BethannNg In reply to GodOfCreation [2014-08-19 02:20:56 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for commenting, but I'm not sure what you mean by a tie bit. Could you explain, since I do appreciate helpful hints.
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GodOfCreation In reply to BethannNg [2014-08-20 04:47:16 +0000 UTC]
OH LOL I meant a Tid bit. Like more darker grey tones. Sorry for the spelling error.
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BethannNg In reply to GodOfCreation [2014-08-20 06:34:13 +0000 UTC]
oh ok. Thanks for explaining. I've been working on that by mixing in some charcoal pencils, since it isn't possible to get a true black with graphite. I think things are improving a bit. Thanks again for commenting
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GodOfCreation In reply to BethannNg [2014-08-20 10:14:56 +0000 UTC]
No problem anytime. And yea try charcoal or even even toned paper. or both lol! Good work none the less. XD
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BethannNg In reply to GodOfCreation [2014-08-20 17:20:16 +0000 UTC]
Yes I have tried using charcoal since then and I'm getting the hang of it. Always working to improve!
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BethannNg In reply to SharpenArrow [2014-08-10 08:13:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And thanks for taking time to comment!
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Foggylights [2014-05-30 00:41:36 +0000 UTC]
This drawing is off to a good start! His neck is oddly tapered though and looks like it would be really thin at the base. Also, I would recommend not smudging everything. You're losing a lot of rich values by doing so! It's more difficult, but when you shade with various pressures, your work will look so much more vibrant even when it's just with a homely graphite pencil. Also, you can do with darker values and I recommend a 6B pencil or greater and the hair is a bit flat and would appreciate having a few light-gray areas to make it look more voluminous. This is a good start but you can take it further!
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BethannNg In reply to Foggylights [2014-05-30 23:16:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for taking the time to comment. I appreciate the tips on shading and will give it a try when I get the chance to draw again. I can never seem to get the blacks I want with a graphite pencil (I used an 8B in some areas of this one) and have thought about mixing with charcoal for darker hues. As far as the neck proportions I can only say that I looked again at the reference photo and the proportions look right to me. He was still pretty adolescent lanky at the time the photo was taken. I have been looking for really good graphite artists to discuss technique with and have made improvements over the years because of that, so I hope to keep improving!
Thanks again!
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Celesol [2014-05-29 21:27:32 +0000 UTC]
The skin and shading are done very well, but I have to say his nose doesn't look very symmetrical.
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Celesol In reply to BethannNg [2014-05-31 04:51:48 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome!
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Kairoze [2014-04-16 06:05:28 +0000 UTC]
Cool technique!
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BethannNg In reply to Kairoze [2014-04-17 15:10:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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Maleiva [2014-03-29 04:46:27 +0000 UTC]
this is a genial work
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BethannNg In reply to Miyucchi [2014-03-19 06:12:30 +0000 UTC]
LOL He IS pretty! Who wouldn't be?
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MorganJFK [2014-03-15 16:35:18 +0000 UTC]
Woah how did I only see this now? This is so GOOD!! Great job! You did awesome on his facial hair and the eyes are really nice too! =]
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BethannNg In reply to MorganJFK [2014-03-15 19:35:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad you like this one!
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MorganJFK In reply to BethannNg [2014-03-15 22:27:53 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! =]
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TheRavenArt [2014-03-12 08:33:00 +0000 UTC]
Wow, very nice my friend!
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BethannNg In reply to TheRavenArt [2014-03-14 21:25:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for commenting! I'm glad you liked it
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TheRavenArt In reply to BethannNg [2014-03-18 11:27:38 +0000 UTC]
No prob dear, you're more than welcome! I like it!
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BethannNg In reply to 4thgeneration [2014-03-09 04:49:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I appreciate the comment!
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EvilScarrlett [2014-03-08 02:33:17 +0000 UTC]
beautiful work!
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BethannNg In reply to EvilScarrlett [2014-03-08 04:40:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And thank you for taking the time to comment.
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