84-29388498905029375 [2010-09-03 14:28:35 +0000 UTC]
This is a really beautiful freely flowing verse. I love the concept, and the way you brought it to life by painting with such beautiful words. I like how it reminds me of the transiency of human existence- how easily we can be erased, forgotten, and the least physically durable memory- a lipstick mark on a coffee mug is all that is left.
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