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Biali — The Little Unknown Ch1 pg.1

Published: 2011-08-26 22:49:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 6009; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 30
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Description Edit 2: I really don't like some of the first pages of this comic, since I didn't put too much effort in them (I had no idea that so many people would actually like it)
So I decided to polish them a bit, without changing everything. The linework will be improved and some wonky perspective will be corrected. Also, some details will be changed so they will have consitancy with the newer chapters. And... I really want to color all of them ^^ I hope you like the improved version!



EDIT: Changed the font and Now I'm really pleased with it ^w^ Font hunting was fun !

First Page: You are looking at it!
Next Page: [link]


I'm just impatient... I just can't let things lay around after I finished them. So instead of Monday, you get the first page today!

This page is in color, because i thought it would be a nice idea to color every first and last page of a chapter.

I'm still not sure if the font is good for a comic... maybe I will change that soon, because I'm not really content with it.

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Okay, so here we have Pamati, who obviously is struggling with her homework.

I feel with her... I had my fair share of cryptic grammar, too. -_-

Well, I hope you like it ^^
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Comments: 24

gamewizard-2008 [2016-04-17 03:54:47 +0000 UTC]

Noooo! Not homeworrrk!

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L45T5ND0 [2013-05-07 09:44:31 +0000 UTC]

Hello Mangaka biali

Would you like to join our group?

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TyrantosaurusDREAD [2013-03-09 04:50:25 +0000 UTC]

The whole 'impatent uploads' thing happens to me alot...Rrrggh...DX

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Biali In reply to TyrantosaurusDREAD [2013-03-09 22:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, but I really don't know what 'impatent* means... I could not find it in the dictionary... Sorry, but english isn't my first language

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TyrantosaurusDREAD In reply to Biali [2013-03-09 23:54:54 +0000 UTC]

'Impatent' meens I'm unable to wait the ammount of time I need to.
It's ok if english isn't your first, I'm happy to explane things to you! :3

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Kindii In reply to TyrantosaurusDREAD [2013-03-10 22:01:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god. One, thank you for the good laugh. Two, you have no business giving English lessons to ANYONE.

Impatient, not impatent.
Amount, not ammount.
Explain, not explane.

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TyrantosaurusDREAD In reply to Kindii [2013-03-10 22:07:21 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! I try my best to make others laugh! X3

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Kindii In reply to TyrantosaurusDREAD [2013-03-10 22:17:50 +0000 UTC]

*You're

It's just...it's funny because the comic page is about the character struggling with grammar, and that's what I saw in the comment too. It's just...perfect. XD

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TyrantosaurusDREAD In reply to Kindii [2013-03-10 22:26:12 +0000 UTC]

I know..X3

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Kindii [2011-09-09 02:50:29 +0000 UTC]

I feel your pain, Pamati. Grammar is always the hardest part of learning a new language.

Keehee. I like her. OwO

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Biali In reply to Kindii [2011-09-09 18:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh I hated grammar tests in my English classes >_< but nothing beats Japanese Grammar in difficulty... at least for me.

And I'm glad you like her. She is such a fun character to draw X3

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chiisai-chan [2011-08-27 23:55:53 +0000 UTC]

Evil grammar! Bad! Bad Bad!

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Biali In reply to chiisai-chan [2011-08-28 18:48:07 +0000 UTC]

yes, but sadly, languages need some logic!

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chiisai-chan In reply to Biali [2011-08-29 03:34:33 +0000 UTC]

I know you're right.

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GTPanda [2011-08-27 03:43:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh no grammar! oAo Five years of Latin and grammar still makes no sense to me. =.= I understand her pain! X3

I'm soooooo excited for this!! It's already awesome, and it's gonna be even more often, I can tell. 8D

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Biali In reply to GTPanda [2011-08-27 23:37:11 +0000 UTC]

Well, Chinese Grammar is the only grammar I find easy. But I imagine Tigo Grammar being something like the Japanese one. when a a language has something like "the passive of suffering" ... you just know that something is going wrong. XD

Aw thank you Panda! I hope you will have fun with reading this comic ^w^

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J0hnny0hm [2011-08-27 01:40:07 +0000 UTC]

They have to learn the Tigo language and way of speaking? owo Sheesh...that's gotta be tough.

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Biali In reply to J0hnny0hm [2011-08-27 23:38:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes, and it really is not easy to learn, So she is frustrated for a good reason...

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oddgtsgirl [2011-08-27 00:57:55 +0000 UTC]

XD cool usually people just upload stuff late, I already liked Pamati from when she was talking to that grodi at a foutain(must be odd/akward talking to someone few inches tall) . i can relate to the grammar stuff too ^-^;; i should be studying that instead of reading G/T stories all day

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Biali In reply to oddgtsgirl [2011-08-27 01:15:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks... well, maybe it will happen in the future that I will upload later than planned... but I hope I will always have this up on time ^^

hehe, yes, I guess that mus be a a lil' awkward... put Pamati sees nothing wrong in it ^^

Well, I should do the same... but Chinese grammar always makes me fall asleep XD

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oddgtsgirl In reply to Biali [2011-08-28 21:34:18 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Filanwizard [2011-08-26 23:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Filan: *Comfort Pam* Don't worry, I never learned Tigo either... Karen certainly tried her best to teach me though.

HA I love how she thinks shes a micro-grodi.

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Biali In reply to Filanwizard [2011-08-27 23:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Pami: "well, then both of us have something in common: we don't need it! It's useless useless, I say!!!

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Filanwizard In reply to Biali [2011-08-27 23:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Filan: I should learn it to honor her though, she was a good partner in the duration of her life. *cries*

(( Yes I figured if hes talking to Pami that Karen is long gone, but I have no doubt she would try and get him to learn Tigo... Then again he would likely try to teach her his own language ))

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