Comments: 43
Jayoshi36 [2013-09-23 11:17:31 +0000 UTC]
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Being my first critique on deviantart, this may not be very helpful, but I'll do the best I can.
The first thing I'll say is that this picture is absolutely perfect in terms of shading and lighting. Everything looks like the sun really was setting to the right, and the fish-eye angle is played out beautifuly. The characters look good as well; the faces look real and alive, and I'm a big fan of the eye style unique to your artwork.
There's not much wrong with this at all. In fact, I had to pretty much dig up what I could say would be wrong, and even then it's still heavily a matter of opinion rather than something concrete.
The only thing wrong I can find regarding the background is that the clouds dont't feel quite right. the colors aren't blending well enough, and it looks like white streaks with the red-blue 3D effect rather than sunest clouds. Only thing other than that is the jeans and jackets could use more wrinkles, and that the wrinkles on both jeans, especially around the knees, don't look right, either.
Again, It's just a matter of opinion, and I'm not letting it affect the overall score very much. This is spectacular work, and there's nothing disruptive about it, just a few opinionated mistakes that are pretty much nitpics.
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AlishDark [2013-09-25 13:51:08 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is so nice. That colors and effects are really cool
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Bichadraws In reply to AlishDark [2013-09-28 22:38:51 +0000 UTC]
thanlk you a lot, dearly X3
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DyeDy [2013-09-24 22:35:25 +0000 UTC]
fabulous *A*
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Bichadraws In reply to DyeDy [2013-09-28 22:46:18 +0000 UTC]
aww X33
thank you X3
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DyeDy In reply to Bichadraws [2013-09-29 00:36:40 +0000 UTC]
Np bby uvu
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Jayoshi36 [2013-09-24 14:05:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for accepting my critque! by the way, I wasn't thinking about it when writing the critique, but you could make the clouds look better by coloring the white clouds nearest to the sun yellow, and then color other clouds a bit more pinkish as they become farther away from the sun.
As for the jeans... I dunno how to descibe the way they should look like, I'll need to make a picture later.
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Bichadraws In reply to Jayoshi36 [2013-09-24 22:12:25 +0000 UTC]
thank you for have done the critique
them always helps me a lot.
i just started to draw clouds in this period
so i'm kind unable to do them.
for the jeans i tried a new style , i will see in the future what use becuase i like them either
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Bichadraws In reply to NijiPinku [2013-09-24 22:13:32 +0000 UTC]
grazie mille :33
qui ho provato a fare un nuovo stile per i jeans, un po' più semplice, poi magari vedrò quale usare perchè mi piacciono entrambi X3
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Bichadraws In reply to OsoIchi [2013-09-23 16:11:39 +0000 UTC]
grazie mille :'3
a dire il vero son una maschio e una femmina X3
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OsoIchi In reply to Bichadraws [2013-09-23 16:17:44 +0000 UTC]
ah.... O_O...sn scema!! vabbè se l'altra fosse un maskio sarebbe un figo assurdo XD cmq io so giuly (si sn una maleducata ke ti commenta i disegni e manco si presenta XD)
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Bichadraws In reply to OsoIchi [2013-09-24 15:44:41 +0000 UTC]
ahah X33 nulla
piacere, chiamami pure leila X3
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OsoIchi In reply to Bichadraws [2013-09-24 16:31:22 +0000 UTC]
asp leila che si legge leila o leila che si legge laila O_O XD
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Bichadraws In reply to OsoIchi [2013-09-24 17:08:20 +0000 UTC]
leila leila X3
il suono laila non mi piace tanto X3
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OsoIchi In reply to Bichadraws [2013-09-24 18:10:08 +0000 UTC]
va bene ricevudo gabo XD
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kyo4kusanagi [2013-09-23 07:05:31 +0000 UTC]
nice perspective there.
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Bichadraws In reply to kyo4kusanagi [2013-09-23 16:13:11 +0000 UTC]
thank you :3 i tried the ''fish eye'' prospective
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Bichadraws In reply to EinnhardeR [2013-09-24 15:41:34 +0000 UTC]
than you a lot QvQ this mens a lot for meh <3
I'm really happy you like this style, few time ago i rediscovered traditional draw
I think i will do more in this style, also becuase it's funnier to do (for me)
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Sonic-Boom4321 [2013-09-23 04:15:11 +0000 UTC]
Love back ground
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Bichadraws In reply to Sonic-Boom4321 [2013-09-23 16:31:42 +0000 UTC]
thank you X33
I will try to do more clouds, because i really can't do them Q3Q
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Sonic-Boom4321 In reply to Bichadraws [2013-09-27 02:15:54 +0000 UTC]
Well this is nice one for someone that "sucks" I suck even more =v= Anyways when's your birthday?
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Bichadraws In reply to Sonic-Boom4321 [2013-09-28 22:47:02 +0000 UTC]
ahah X33 obiviously uvu
it's in june X3,
exsaly on 2nd june X3
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Sonic-Boom4321 In reply to Bichadraws [2013-09-29 01:42:05 +0000 UTC]
Yay! >3 Now I know when I can draw u a picture as a gift!
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Eduardailustras [2013-09-22 22:40:28 +0000 UTC]
awesome draw we have here >W<
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EhyJay [2013-09-22 22:02:29 +0000 UTC]
Vomito arcobaleni aiuto
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Bichadraws In reply to EhyJay [2013-09-24 21:42:52 +0000 UTC]
AHAHAH CIAO MANA TI RISPONDI DA SOLO
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xBobbyTHx [2013-09-22 21:59:52 +0000 UTC]
BELLISSIMOO *^* SEI BRAVISSIMA COME AL SOLITOO!! *^*
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