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stuck-in-suburbia [2011-10-06 17:30:12 +0000 UTC]
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This is a pretty piece of work. I find there are some things that could be adjusted, though. First, I found it difficult to understand what was going on O2/CO2 -wise. I first thought they were some sort of ghosts or aura. Which, could be true. It would give a more abstract message, I suppose.
Second, the white emote is very faint, it is really hard to see it's facial expression, in comparison to the dark emote. The blue emote seems very neutral, which I am taking he cannot see the emotes hovering in front of him.
I like the dithering style on the tree, it's not a very common style. The sun is very well suited, I really like the aura around the sun, though I could see it being a bit brighter.
All around, very nicely done.
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bigfunkychiken In reply to Twoohten [2011-08-14 19:58:26 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the constructive criticism!
I swear, I would do what you said, but I used multiple transparent layers that I merged together, so now I don't know what transparency I used (when you merge transparent layers in Gimp it shows 100% transparency).
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