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bigfunkychiken — Ninja Rvmp
Published: 2009-12-22 15:59:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1218; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 0
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*Critique Requested!This is a revamp of
. This is truly my best emote by far. This took around 40 minutes to pixel and animate. I know there are many revamps of , but I am not crazy about them
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A revamp of the ninja, yes there are many, yes I should take the time to look at them... And I did!.. Quickly... And I noticed A) their eyes are usually more visible and shifty like the original and B) Few if none have the head band. I will now expand on these thoughts.
The eyes on this ninja are still and staring, they are also grey and blend in with the emote and his ninja outfit. Neither of these points are bad, however they make a bad combination. The original were shifty eyes that stood out much better and made more of an impact. Also the original mask shape around the eyes was rounder, your's is thinner. Not a bad thing, however this gives you less space for the eyes and too much space either side of them.
The head band, in the original was a red mark, but yours expands on this and looks brilliant. I love the waving, very smooth and well done there, its the best part!
Overall its nice, just the eyes need to stand out more, they were the focal point of the original and they're a little overshadowed in this version, so to speak.
-Plar
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Hrm it's quite good might bundle some thoughts on it and write you a critique!
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yes
that took me forever to figure out!
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