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WaterLilly19 In reply to Billby13 [2015-09-21 16:50:41 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh.... tsk tsk tsk. His big brother is not going to be happy about that.
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Billby13 In reply to WaterLilly19 [2015-09-22 21:27:26 +0000 UTC]
Oh most definitely not. At this rate, he might as for a leave of absence from work just so he can come visit Ba Haid at school and personally deal with him.
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WaterLilly19 In reply to Billby13 [2015-09-22 22:38:35 +0000 UTC]
Haha, the funny thing is that's what I pictured. I think you should write about that.
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Billby13 In reply to WaterLilly19 [2015-09-22 22:46:47 +0000 UTC]
XD I really should. I can see it now.
There's a knock at the door, Fain goes to answer it.
Ba Haid: "Who is it?" asking as he sits on the couch. He looks over, hearing someone walk up beside him. "D-Dar Zain? What are you doing here?"
XD
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WaterLilly19 In reply to Billby13 [2015-09-22 23:39:24 +0000 UTC]
Ohhhh! I can just feel Ba Haid's panic! Oh please oh please oh please write this!!!!!
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Billby13 In reply to WaterLilly19 [2015-09-22 23:51:14 +0000 UTC]
I think I shall ^_^ and I think what is going to be most startling to poor Ba Haid, is that he is not going to expect his brother to do that, not in a million years.
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WaterLilly19 In reply to Billby13 [2015-09-23 00:01:38 +0000 UTC]
Haha yes. I feel torn between feeling bad for him and knowing he deserves it. Yes, agree. But if I remember correctly at the end of the first story Ba Haid was thinking to himself that if his brother found out about him drinking he might chance his mind about punishing him that way. I can also see his older brother comforting him afterwards and that bringing them closer. Is that what you see?
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Billby13 In reply to WaterLilly19 [2015-09-23 00:22:10 +0000 UTC]
I do, and I'm sure it willhelp resolve many issues they have, show Ba Haid that his brother cares enough to actually come light years to settle this matter personally. And he'll definitely need comfort I'm sure as no doubt Udasa already got her hands on him.
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WaterLilly19 In reply to Billby13 [2015-09-23 00:37:07 +0000 UTC]
Aw. I can not wait to see all the brotherly love. It just feels my heart with joy just thinking about it. ^_^ I would love to see them closer. What kind of problems do they have?
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Billby13 In reply to WaterLilly19 [2015-09-23 01:25:54 +0000 UTC]
The age difference between them is probably the biggest issue, they didn't really play or anything like that together growing up because Dar Zain felt he had to act more like a guardian than a brother to him. And that always made Ba Haid feel like he wasn't as loved as he would of liked. Number one reason he acts out, he wants that attention. Even if he won't admit it.
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Billby13 In reply to WaterLilly19 [2015-09-23 03:42:38 +0000 UTC]
Not sure, hopefully soon while all these ideas are still fresh ^_^
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WaterLilly19 In reply to Billby13 [2015-09-23 04:00:35 +0000 UTC]
Yay!!! *bounces up and down in my seat all excited like haha.* Hopefully I will be all caught up and be able to spend all the time I want reading it. ^_^
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Billby13 In reply to WaterLilly19 [2015-09-23 04:02:48 +0000 UTC]
I hope so, there are so many things I need to finish and start writing XD
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WaterLilly19 In reply to Billby13 [2015-09-23 04:29:54 +0000 UTC]
Haha it's true ^_^ *hands tissue.* Don't cry, only if they are tears of joy. Gah... Bill-by... hugging.. too... tight! Haha
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Billby13 In reply to WaterLilly19 [2015-09-23 04:53:36 +0000 UTC]
They are tears of joy, oh, heh, sorry." *loosens grip and hugs a bit softer*
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WaterLilly19 In reply to Billby13 [2015-09-23 11:44:25 +0000 UTC]
*Takes a breath before smiling and hugging you back.*
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Grazia-Spank [2015-05-16 13:19:59 +0000 UTC]
D'aaaww
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Rhys1010 [2015-05-12 23:26:53 +0000 UTC]
He really needs to go and be a bit more manly. Stand up for your mistakes and take your whippings like manly Man Dan
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-05-13 01:16:14 +0000 UTC]
XD Not all men are created equal in manliness XD
Plus, he is a vampire, she isn't going to go easy on him. And there is always that fact that she doesn't stop till she gets some real tears.
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-05-13 22:11:22 +0000 UTC]
Well then... WHAT DID HE DO?
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-05-13 22:33:31 +0000 UTC]
I have no idea XD Probably drinking on school grounds.
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-05-13 22:34:45 +0000 UTC]
That's not a spanking/whipping offense. That's a demerit at most. Now, if he's underage...
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-05-13 22:42:26 +0000 UTC]
He is.
Udasa: "Do you think yourself in any position to deem what merits my guidance?"
Geez! You just keep on appearing!
Udasa: "It is a rather slow day at the office, as they say."
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-05-13 22:46:20 +0000 UTC]
"Not really, but isn't that a bit harsh?"
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-05-13 22:53:42 +0000 UTC]
Udasa: "I wouldn't whip him, if that is your concern. I think my hand would be more than enough."
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-05-13 23:25:32 +0000 UTC]
"It was. Thought you would use something like a whip on him..."
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-05-14 21:11:23 +0000 UTC]
Udasa: "My riding crop is more a scare tactic then a true implement these days, it is far better suited for whipping over the backsides of ill behaved soldiers than students."
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-05-15 18:35:02 +0000 UTC]
"Ah, that's good. That would be really harsh if it was used on a student..."
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-05-15 18:57:09 +0000 UTC]
Udasa: "That is not to say i have not before when it was warranted."
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-05-15 19:09:27 +0000 UTC]
"Never with a Mortal student, I hope. Or only if it was a really harsh thing the student did do."
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-05-15 20:05:14 +0000 UTC]
Udasa: "Not that i can recall, and we have so few humans attending."
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-05-15 20:10:10 +0000 UTC]
"You have two that I know of, me and one called Lassic, right? Though isn't he a bit small?"
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-05-15 20:27:08 +0000 UTC]
Udasa: "Lassic is mortal, but not human, some sort of pixie i presume...those ears and that diminutive size. There are a few others. But mostly other vampires, werewolves, witches, several alien creatures, a few demons, the odd angel or two, the listcdncache-a.akamaihd.net/items/… "> goes on."
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-05-15 20:49:24 +0000 UTC]
"Wow. That is quite the list..." I said, impressed at how many students the Academy had.
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-06-01 21:22:05 +0000 UTC]
Udasa: "With how quickly the empire is expanding, and all the new species we come in contact with, thenhead master strives to insure all races are offered a chance here at the academy." She smiled proudly.
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-06-02 20:59:06 +0000 UTC]
"So, how many new races did the academy find so far?"
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-06-04 22:20:12 +0000 UTC]
Udasa: "Oh goodness. I can't be certain.....I would have to say at least a minimum of 200 and counting."
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-06-07 17:09:13 +0000 UTC]
"That's really amazing." I replied.
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-06-09 22:29:14 +0000 UTC]
Udasa: "All thanks to her majesty and the head master." She smiled.
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-06-12 20:07:45 +0000 UTC]
"She is one impressive lady."
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-06-13 04:59:47 +0000 UTC]
Udasa: "That she is, the very rock of our empire." *smiles proudly with loyalty in her eyes*
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Rhys1010 In reply to Billby13 [2015-06-16 01:52:21 +0000 UTC]
"That right there is real loyalty. Standing by her, thick and thin... Though, from what I hear, it's mostly thick, with the thin being some Vampire hunters who want to destroy every vampire."
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Billby13 In reply to Rhys1010 [2015-06-17 04:21:18 +0000 UTC]
UdasaL "Such is the way of the universe, not all beings can appreciate what it is our empress is trying to accomplish. They are simply misguided, and honsetly, I think them jealous of all the wondrous blessings her blood has imbued our kind with."
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