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Billm2n — Bloodlust
Published: 2012-09-07 06:12:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 559; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 24
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Description The darkness is closing in and I can't take it,
This is the end and I don't know if I can face it,
My blood coats my shirt and the ground,
I look for help but nobody is around,
My screams are almost deafening,
I think back on my life and everything,
I just wish I was able to mean something,
My life has been nothing but perpetual loneliness,
A state of solitude and nothingness,
Maybe I could have saved her if I tried,
But then we both would have died,
They were too powerful for me to take,
Now they've broken what I thought could never break,
My soul is gone and my heart is lost,
I can feel my body start to frost,
The world I once knew is leaving me quickly,
I am starting to feel sickly,
I'm done my life is through,
I just want you to know that I love you.
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Comments: 11

Ice-Dutchess [2012-09-09 01:46:51 +0000 UTC]

I kinda tried to put this to the tune of savior by Rise Against.. It kinda worked.. Not really.. But that's whet it made me think of, for some odd reason. I think the feelings you expressed are remarkably accurate.

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ArtofDezzy [2012-09-07 11:05:09 +0000 UTC]

WOW i am amazed it is beautiful, i almost cried but then again i love it

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Billm2n In reply to ArtofDezzy [2012-09-08 10:15:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow really? Thank you so much it always makes me feel good when my poetry has an impact on someone.

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ArtofDezzy In reply to Billm2n [2012-09-13 02:39:20 +0000 UTC]

it does alot for someone

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Billm2n In reply to ArtofDezzy [2012-09-13 03:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Is that person you by any chance?

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ArtofDezzy In reply to Billm2n [2012-09-14 00:33:42 +0000 UTC]

yes it as of right now

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Billm2n In reply to ArtofDezzy [2012-09-14 01:49:22 +0000 UTC]

Well thanks love I'm glad it had an impact. <3

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HellzAssassin [2012-09-07 06:37:35 +0000 UTC]

That was both sad and sweet. That was really good. Great job.

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Billm2n In reply to HellzAssassin [2012-09-07 06:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Also I read your poem/short story "Nothing Else Matters" and I really love it so I decided to become your 5th watcher. I am really looking forward to what you release next. Also I believe you deserve more than just 5 watchers so I will be featuring you in a journal I make tomorrow... I can't stand seeing talent that goes unrecognized it's depressing. Anyways if you would ever like to talk my Facebook, Twitter, and Skype can all be found in my I.D on my page. I hope you have a goodnight and that you sleep well whenever you do.

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HellzAssassin In reply to Billm2n [2012-09-07 07:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Thank you so much! I'm speechless, truly I am. That means a lot to me. Thank you.

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Billm2n In reply to HellzAssassin [2012-09-08 10:15:08 +0000 UTC]

It's really nothing you deserve it man.

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