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Billm2n — Broken Home.
Published: 2012-08-01 20:41:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 743; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 11
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Description They say to be strong and to never fall,
But they have never been through anything at all,
They sit in their big houses and act like they know what it's like,
My father hits me everyday and my mother does absolutely nothing,
I'm like a bird with a broken wing,
Caught in an endless circle of pain,
Sure I've thought about ending it all a few times,
But that's never the way to go,
I need to keep my head up and never fall,
Keep fighting and rise above it all,
My eyes are constantly pouring out tears,
I am living what some people would call their worst fear,
In a broken home I will be,
Until I can finally be set free.
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Comments: 14

LiliaKatie [2012-08-04 18:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice job T-T

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Billm2n In reply to LiliaKatie [2012-08-22 02:40:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.

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bear48 [2012-08-04 00:18:09 +0000 UTC]

nice job

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Billm2n In reply to bear48 [2012-08-22 02:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Ice-Dutchess [2012-08-02 00:56:24 +0000 UTC]

Definitely full of emotion. My home is not broken but I do feel for those out there who are suffering. It's sweet that you wrote this in consideration of your family, and I am honored. Thank you, so much.

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Billm2n In reply to Ice-Dutchess [2012-08-22 02:41:05 +0000 UTC]

It was a pleasure to write this, if you want another just let me know. C:

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Ice-Dutchess In reply to Billm2n [2012-08-22 03:06:50 +0000 UTC]

I most certainly will do so, and for the record, i was very surprised.

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Billm2n In reply to Ice-Dutchess [2012-08-22 03:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Surprised?

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Ice-Dutchess In reply to Billm2n [2012-08-22 03:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it was not what i was expecting. And i believe the criteria i gave was for me to be surprised. dont worry though, its a pleasant one!

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Billm2n In reply to Ice-Dutchess [2012-08-22 03:42:56 +0000 UTC]

I really wish we could talk more... I really think you're amazing.. also as soon as you get an idea I'll do it.

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Ice-Dutchess In reply to Billm2n [2012-08-23 02:25:21 +0000 UTC]

How sweet of you to say! And I really do appreciate it.

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Senyuri [2012-08-01 23:14:57 +0000 UTC]

awesome poem Austin~
I understand totally T^T

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Billm2n In reply to Senyuri [2012-08-22 02:41:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.

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Senyuri In reply to Billm2n [2012-08-23 00:26:43 +0000 UTC]

no problem~

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