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Billm2n — Obsolete
Published: 2012-07-09 03:29:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 386; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 10
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Description You're left to the side by the one you loved,
You thought they were the one,
The person who completed you and made your heart happy,
But it all went to shit one day,
Your heart breaks, your hands shake, and you don't know what went wrong,
Broken, beaten, and alone you're left to cry with that repeat on that one song,
The one song that explains the situation,
The one that tears your heart into pieces but you love the pain,
Tears falling down your cheeks serving as your only salvation,
As you go through this break-up and feel a transformation,
At the point of almost breaking you stand on your own two feet,
Breaking the bonds of what once was and you continue your life,
Looking for someone to love and to stop all of the strife,
I hope one day you find that one who can make your life complete,
But as for me my love life is forever obsolete.
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Comments: 23

CrimzonStar [2012-07-14 18:26:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Billm2n In reply to CrimzonStar [2012-07-14 18:28:15 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome what's wrong?

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CrimzonStar In reply to Billm2n [2012-07-18 17:38:16 +0000 UTC]

Going through a break-up.... still and it's been over a year. Broken hearts take long to heal I guess. How are you doing?

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Billm2n In reply to CrimzonStar [2012-07-18 17:52:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm doing fine...if you need someone to talk I'm always here..

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CrimzonStar In reply to Billm2n [2012-07-18 19:15:40 +0000 UTC]

That truly means a lot to me. Thank you my friend!

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Billm2n In reply to CrimzonStar [2012-07-18 19:19:28 +0000 UTC]

Welcome love and if you have Facebook you can go ahead and add me so we can talk C:

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CrimzonStar In reply to Billm2n [2012-07-18 19:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Will do sweetheart. Same name?

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Billm2n In reply to CrimzonStar [2012-07-18 19:57:52 +0000 UTC]

[link] Here it is dear.

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tru-animaniac [2012-07-10 00:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Breaking up is hard, but you know what? The best part about breaking up is how good you feel when you've finally moved on. I find it more of a new beginning toward something larger. The bad part is having to go thru all that. You did good.

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Billm2n In reply to tru-animaniac [2012-07-10 02:26:03 +0000 UTC]

You're right and thank you very much.

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ChiefWord [2012-07-09 21:49:48 +0000 UTC]

I just fucking broke up. And that's how it feels. Eleven months gone to hell, I love this piece.

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Billm2n In reply to ChiefWord [2012-07-10 03:22:44 +0000 UTC]

That's shitty to hear but I'm glad that you enjoy this poem.

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ChiefWord In reply to Billm2n [2012-07-10 13:07:20 +0000 UTC]

haha yeah

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Gary-thedreamingpoet [2012-07-09 19:25:09 +0000 UTC]

You and me both... Raw emotion beautifully captured.

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Billm2n In reply to Gary-thedreamingpoet [2012-07-10 03:21:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. <3

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DaisyLover87 [2012-07-09 04:17:59 +0000 UTC]

Break ups are never fun...

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Billm2n In reply to DaisyLover87 [2012-07-09 05:34:26 +0000 UTC]

I have to agree..

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DaisyLover87 In reply to Billm2n [2012-07-09 06:31:31 +0000 UTC]

*nods* Sorry to hear you're going through that.

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Billm2n In reply to DaisyLover87 [2012-07-09 06:33:09 +0000 UTC]

*Smiles* I'm not just my friend is.

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DaisyLover87 In reply to Billm2n [2012-07-09 18:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh gotcha. Well...sorry to hear they are then...still is tough situation to find yourself in. Luckily, things do get better.

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Billm2n In reply to DaisyLover87 [2012-07-10 03:22:21 +0000 UTC]

I agree they do and if you ever need someone to talk to I'm here.

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DaisyLover87 In reply to Billm2n [2012-07-12 05:16:11 +0000 UTC]

Exactly. That's what a good friend is for.

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Billm2n In reply to DaisyLover87 [2012-07-14 18:34:34 +0000 UTC]

That's right,

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