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Jumbi [2020-05-07 00:07:47 +0000 UTC]
elpse's markings are tattoos??? it is a lot more patient than i perhaps gave it credit for.
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bimshwel In reply to Jumbi [2020-05-07 17:13:42 +0000 UTC]
at least *I* assumed the marks were tattoos, when I wrote this! If I decide otherwise I will be sure to go back and change this part. That thinking derives from considering elpse and nemitz to belong to approximately the same species, so major differences, such as elpse being green, having dark spots and not having fur must have been deliberately brought about by the creatures themselves. But since it is fantasy I could definitely issue another explanation or not explain it at all.
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Jumbi In reply to bimshwel [2020-05-07 23:07:21 +0000 UTC]
ah, i didn't realize they were from the same species! my memory is a little spotty, but it was my understanding that nemitz and elpse were two different species that traveled together, where elpse's kind was seen as a lower class of sorts. i will take a closer look upon a re-read, when i find myself visiting your story yet again.
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bimshwel In reply to Jumbi [2020-05-08 00:40:29 +0000 UTC]
just because I thought that does not mean I made it apparent! But they are so similar in shape that it would feel like cheating for me to claim they were different except superficially.
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vindurza [2020-04-24 17:07:08 +0000 UTC]
The holes in the wall lets you know this was a very serious move.
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bimshwel In reply to vindurza [2020-04-24 18:16:18 +0000 UTC]
Those features were there before but blocked by picture frames!
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vindurza In reply to bimshwel [2020-04-24 18:29:26 +0000 UTC]
modern art covered by contemporary art work such a strange world
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