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Published: 2013-05-17 23:39:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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You put yourself out there.you give hints
your actions should speak. shouldn't they?
the words are in your eyes. can't he see?
touched by your smile, your mouth, your mouth shows emotion. doesn't it?
why is he confused?! didn't i show it clearly?
aren't actions Louder then words??
hands! show by your movement what you want from him.
he has to get it by now.. right? show me you understand.
if you say it with voice... wouldn't that be cheating?
but yet you want, no, you Need him to understand...
WITHOUT telling him word for word.
he can't be this dense. is he just laughing at your show?
or are you slow as to not see his answer?
maybe it was too heart wrenching to watch,
so you closed your eyes.
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Comments: 6
Quite well expressed, with not too much, but yet just enough left to interpretation. That's quite the poem, and the type that, if given the right opportunity, would have received quite a bit of positive attention and feedback.
My apologies for commenting on it so late.
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thank you. your expression is much appreciated. and don't worry as to when it was received, it is still as refreshing.
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Really happy to hear.
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I like your unique writing style. It makes the poem stand out more!
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