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Published: 2011-03-02 08:17:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 5318; Favourites: 155; Downloads: 56
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From today's LS..... twas fuuuun to make..... sleeeeepy....... know something gais? Ever since I started streaming, I've been drawing a lot... this does me good I'd say.Uhhh brain not working..... my OC blah blah blah... *falls asleep*
*wakes up* Ed's POV! *shot*
This is one of two pics, once I've made both, Imma put em together.
Laters....
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I think this theme song will be perfect!
youtu.be/kMCHzUPIkQc
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so pretty
man u can draw awesome than me!!! TT_____________________________TT
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LOL your welcome
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Precioso!! Con quΓ© sentimientos los haces *v*
Como me gustarΓa hacer dibu por dΓa como tΓΊ *o* (jo, pero mi tabla estΓ‘ medio muerta 
Me encanta la pose y el paisaje.
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Ah enserio? D;
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My one point of critique is that it somehow looks like your OC is floating above the floor.
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Hmm well I don't know anymore, some tell me it does look like it, some tell me it doesn't... to me it doesn't, I do have to fix her left foot... fingers I mean but other than that... I dunno.
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Aaaw, this makes me want summer to come faster. I can't remember the last time I wore shorts comfortably. Love the warm, fuzzy feeling this gives, great job with the shading and lights.
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I know the feeling lol.
Thanks!
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Her hair is all fwooosh, but the curtains aren't moving much. Considering the "fabric" you're trying to portray, it's very odd that it isn't moving. Her shirt, too.
That's all I've got to say that's relatively negative about the drawing. XD I liked the city you drew, and her hair color, and her skin tone (shading too). It's beautiful, truly. Althoug, considering how her skin was touched up, the hair should be shinier. XD Also, her boob when compared to her hips, shoulders, and feet. Something's not right there, I don't know what...
Might just be me. XD
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Eso es porque el aire no les pega de frente como a ella, y la blusa es de un material relativamente pesado o asi lo pense yo.
Bueno con respecto al color, dicelo al SAI XD porque esto es hecho usando efectos de las layers, tecnicamente deberian ser "equvalentes" esas tonalidades por lo mismo. En cuanto a la pose, es que es una pose algo extraΓ±a, pero ya me ayudaron a revisarlo y asi debe verse, para variar he empezado a hacer las cosas por pasos y con mas paciencia, y antes de la ropa hago la silueta.
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But it's not hitting her straight on, either, if the direction her hair is going is something to base myself on. I mean, it looks like it's coming in from the sides. And air is like a... a fart, it gets everywhere. XDDD (Don't ask why, just accept the analogy.)
XD Ah, eso sΓ. Pero el SAI es genial, no le podemos decir nada al TodoPoderoso SAI. XD
La pose se me hace bastante bien, digo yo, mi problema es el Γ‘ngulo de su busto y sus pies en comparaciΓ³n con el resto del cuerpo. Los pies no me parecen tan fuera de lugar cΓ³mo el busto, pero no sΓ©. He visto a tu OC desde otros Γ‘ngulos y no tiene las boobs tan grandes. But I dunno.
You've always been far more patient than me, I dunno how you can get even more so. XD
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Pero el aire hace que las cosas ondeen, y a como lo veo yo y lo mismo que tu dices, el aire es bien loco. Y de hecho si se esta moviendo la cortina de la derecha, pero ahi esta como haciendo una u hacia uno, y no la quise mover mas para no taparla a ella.
Lo es.
Pues a como me ayudo a revisarlo otra amiga, se da ese efecto cuando te paras asi, mas si estas sacando el pecho como la OC.... y ademas tiene los hombros como hacia atras, igual luego te explico con el boceto, ya sabes que me gusta explicarme.
College does stuff to you.
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Yeah, but the one on the left, which should also recieve a breeze, is pretty lonesome. It's a see-through curtain. I think it slightly covering her would give a sort of magical feel to the drawing.
Fo shizzle.
I will stand that way for you, and you will see that even with ginormous boobs, that much volume from that angle is almost impossible. Her hips and shoulders would have to face the viewer a bit more for it to be anatomically correct. X3 I dunno, like I said, it just seems wrong to me.
... Dude, I want out of this school. Or else I'll go on a prefect killing-spree.
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No, I noticed her boob too. XD Not really what a girl should be noticing, but I noticed it. I thought I was the only one, too. Compared to her shoulders, mainly, the boob looks pretty big and that's really the only thing that truly bothered me.
But it truly is a beautiful piece. I just love that this character is a redhead. I'm blonde, but I think redheads just have the prettiest hair. And there's not nearly enough redheaded OC's when it comes to FMA ones. I bet Ed was wishing that shirt was see-through! Oh, so bad to say. LOL
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XD I think that, as girls, we have a right to notice boobs. XD We are, after all, the ones who know them best. But yeah, due to the angle, I don't think it should be that large either.
Fo shizzle. XD Word, sistah!
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When you stand the way she is standing, that happens... I mean she IS standing in a pretty odd position so I don't blame ya for thinking so, but yeah it should look like that. Imma post the sketch later since some seem to be confused.
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I understand the position and I know what you mean...I think it's really just her shoulders that I'm noticing the most. But it really is a beautiful picture and at least your understanding of anatomy is heck of a lot better than mine. :]
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Her shoulders... care to explain? I mean if I'm really wrong I'd like to see why.
LOL Thanks, oh and I'm glad that you like my OC, yeah there should be more redheaded FMA OCs. :3
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Well...just the left shoulder. It just looks a little small compared to the rest of the proportions on her body. 
That's why I love your OC so much. I don't see too many redheads. Most of them are blonde XD
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Oh that, lol no. If you look closely you'll notice that's because of her hair. There's... more shoulder under that bit of hair lol.
Yeah, and FMA kind of like... has a lot of 'em already.
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Mkay, no worries then lol. Maybe my eyes are just messing with me, who knows. Still, all in all a beautiful picture, that's the jist of it.
Yeah...way too many blondes. And that's coming from a blonde. Thank you for being original and going red.
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It's ok, it DOES give that illusion, similar things have happened to me before and well I like to tell poeple the "why". Just like how I like it when people tell me exactly why they think something is wrong.
LOL Red is badass!
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Well, that's great of you to do. That's what good artists do and I can appreciate that
Agreed, redheads are way badass!
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YUS X3.... I wish I was one .... ._. XD
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You're welcome ^W^
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It is so pretty and serene. Though, that does not look like much to sleep in XD.
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Thanks! 
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Lovely work; I love the lighting,
The only thing that I think could be fixed is the direction of her feat with the ground. Perfect, otherwise. :3
XDDDDD Ed loves that too.
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