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Published: 2008-08-17 16:30:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 784; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 17
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wow..tare manipularea ! filmul ala te "bantuie" mult timp dupa ce il vezi
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I had the same thought... it looks like the girl from The Ring.
One note of criticism is that texture of the walls. If it is meant to be an effect of the film you're fine. But if you meant it to look like the walls themselves were scratched up then you might want to adjust it because you have lines going across empty space (and the girl's chest in one instance)
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thank you...i appreciate your critic and yes u are right,it's meant to resemble an old film
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Ok. I would suggest lightening it up a little bit. Looking at that those two long lines, it goes along one wall, jumps the gap where the girl is, and then continues on the wall. If the girl is stacked in front, send her further back in the layer order.
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