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black-rose-90 — I Lay Here [NSFW]
Published: 2007-12-14 15:50:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description I lay here waiting
Waiting for your touch
I lay here painting
Painting the picture of our love
I lay here imagining
Imagining your lips on mine
I lay here wishing
Wishing for you and sweet red wine
I lay here yearning
Yearning for your body
I lay here wanting
Wanting to be naughty
I lay here yelling
Yelling for your hardness
I lay here dreaming
Dreaming of you in my wetness
I lay here patiently waiting
Waiting for you to come
I lay here wanting
Wanting us to become one
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Comments: 5

myshadow535 [2007-12-15 00:10:23 +0000 UTC]

that rocked prepare for a fave and a watch

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black-rose-90 In reply to myshadow535 [2007-12-17 13:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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killmehard [2007-12-14 17:50:48 +0000 UTC]

Awsome poem!! That one definetly beats all of mine. I'm totally jealous of your talent right now. lol. That's it I'm getting me a boyfriend 2day!

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black-rose-90 In reply to killmehard [2007-12-14 18:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Lol! Thank you and please don't be jealous! -.- Everyone has their own style of writing and everyone else's always seem better than their own. Never under estimate your own talent because that will lead to your downfall. Have faith in your writing and it will grow as you grow. It will become part of you making it so much more emotional. Just never give up and you will see your writing blossom I promise.

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killmehard In reply to black-rose-90 [2007-12-17 20:03:04 +0000 UTC]

Awww! Thank you. Hopefully I will get better! So how was your weekend?

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