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blackbutterfly006 — Tiger Hoodie - Black/Red
Published: 2013-03-11 21:21:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2178; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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This is probably the final Tiger-Design (especially concerning the colours) I might use some time. Feedback and ideas for improvement are very much appreciated
I hope you like it!You may not use this, especially not for commercial use!!
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This is really cool. Especially using the tiger concept. Fav animal, there. Now, I have a few ideas, and they won't have to be added. Though I really hope they would, I understand the basis of reality with such things. Still, though, I'll mention them with hope applied to the mentioning. The first one is for the hood. How about having three of those tear slash marks on there? Have one on each side and one down the middle like the tiger opened it's paw when scraping at the head. If you really want to be daring. Do three sets of three. The large ones where stated and two small ones accompanying each. On the sides have a small one near the top and a small one near the bottom. For the middle, have one small one on the top of one side and a small one at the bottom of the opposite side. On the right side(same side that has your logo near the cuff), have the four claw slashes going downwards on the bicep section. Have them the same length as the sideways ones on the other arm. Lastly, have random placements for claw slashes at the bottom where the stretchband portion is. If open-ended, or drawstrung bottom, still have it randomly there. Some down and some sideways. That is all. Anymore would corrupt the detailing of the design. That nears the line without going over it. I thank you for reading this, and thank you for posting the work. My apology if I pushed the bar. Just offering my insight for it as a future purchaser.
Fav'd, as you should know.
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First of all, thank you very much for taking time for this and letting me know of your ideas! 
But again, thank you very much for your ideas, don't hesitate to post them on my stuff
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Ok. Fair share. Not to be pushy at all,but try out my idea. Not to have a debate for it, nor to replace yours. But, just for the giggling shmitts. Basically, to give a visual towards the textual concept. If it is something you might enjoy, you can note me a link for me to take a gander. Again, not pushing for to replace. Just would like for you to see, as well as me to also view it. Not a mandatory. Merely a suggestion. And, whether yay or nay on this idea, I thank you kindly for taking the time.
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I can try it out, of course. Though I didn't exactly understand where you wanted to place all the scratches. And if I imply the idea of the logo on one arm it would get in the way with the other scratches, so that would present a problem to me, I think.^^
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Not on the arm, but the shoulder. So, when they turn their head to the side, it is right there. Either facing upwards or facing frontwards. The other scratches on the opposite arm from the original scratches. Around the bicep area. And, I have alternate hoodie design ideas, but that would be best discussed via note than openly, here. So, tag me and let me know the basis. Then, the building can began.
Yes, I answered both comments with this one. Yay, two point score. *Let's the crowd go wild for the double score shot*
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This is very nice. My only major concern would be the small logo on the sleeve. I'd suggest placing it somewhere where it is more visible and not as easily frayed. Most logos are placed around the upper left on the front of the shirt or hoodie. This way it would avoid fraying and would attract more attention. Other than that I'd say the tail area on the shoulder bit would stretch a bit and could cause the Image to warp or have areas of the tail fall off. Most people wouldn't find it as an issue, but I'm telling you because you might care. This also depends on how the shirt would be made. I figure that it would be done with a decal type base instead of direct inking to the hoodie.
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First of all I'd like to thank you for taking some time and give some real good feedback, that's what I was hoping for! 
For the tail: I noticed that problem too while designing it, but it was hard to place it on the back without making the whole design too small. The only think I could try is to let it go in another direction without letting it look unnatural..But I'm really thankful for your help!
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No problem. I'll be looking forward to future designs. I'll try to give you good feedback in the future as well.
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Sorry for straying into here, too. Especially after I left my comment. But, if you wanted to do something else with the tail, do a slight bend on it. Bend the tail down and have it come up to touch the shoulder. That way, it could hold close to your concept without straying too far into the left arm side. And, if you want to move the logo, you could put it on the right shoulder. Either aiming straight up or facing forward. And, if you do choose that, have the logo be in a darker shade of red to allow for it to catch attention without distraction from the design. So, it can be easily noticeable without being thrown into the assumption that it is a slash and not properly noticed as something mildly different in terms of attention grasping(so that it can gain the additional notice with focused attention for the designer).
And, these are just my ideas for those factors. Again, excuse me for diving into this discussion, here.
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I thank you too, for adding your ideas! The suggestion for the tail sounds really good, I will try it that way, but for the logo I think it would be better to put it on the frontside of the hoodie, otherwise I think it wouldn't fit to the motive and the arms would be too filled, and I don't want it to look overloaded. I think I'll post a newer version when I'm done with it
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Give both a quick attempt, if possible. If it is possible, create them both like you really want each design. Not to snag you away from your aim, but just to open the horizon to really show what is truly possible within the capability of that design. Not forcing you to do so. Simply offering the suggestion.
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I will try them out when I have the time to do it
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I WOULD SO BUY THIS!!! I WOULD BUY THIS REPEATEDLY! SO AWESOME
...don't get any ideas though
...I don't have any money O.O
hehe
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XD but I've heard that several times now....maybe I will one day...and then I'll force you to buy one, muahahah! Don't worry, just kidding
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I would force myself to buy it
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XD good, then I wouldn't have a bad conscience for forcing you XD
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Thank you, I'm glad to hear that. I wouldn't want to wear an ugly hoodie XD
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XD if you ever are selling them let us know!
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You'll be the first ones to know it
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thank you so much, I was hoping to hear something like that XD
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lol. XD I'd wear it, myself.
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Hmh, maybe I should really sell those designs..
? XD
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This is awesome. Are you going to sell these or do something else?
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Well, I didn't plan to sell them, my plan is to get one myself. I don't know if I might sell them one day and if anyone would buy them
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If you ever do decide to sell them, I'd definitely buy one.
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Hehe, I'll think about it XD
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