Comments: 56
this-secert [2012-01-23 21:38:29 +0000 UTC]
this is really good! did you write more?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
kiki5n [2011-09-03 09:21:51 +0000 UTC]
NOT PARTICULLARLY GREAT?!?!?!?!
Oh, wait your right, it ISN'T particullarly great... it's AMAZING!!!
I LOOOVE THESE TWO!!! I've been looking for fanfictions of them, but with no luck... but then BOOM! You throw THIS at me and.. wow!!! It simply ROCKS, nuff said....
I'd say moar but.. I wanna read chaptre 2 8D See ya there!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Crystalkit1 [2011-06-03 01:23:27 +0000 UTC]
Wow, i love it!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
hellodragon [2011-03-26 18:10:02 +0000 UTC]
I love the idea! You just need to work on your grammar a little bit, but other than that, it's fantastic(:
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
TaylorStarr [2011-01-30 05:47:53 +0000 UTC]
This sounds interesting and cute!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
stormylol [2010-07-14 05:47:28 +0000 UTC]
Scorpious and Rose! If JK Rowling continues in this generation, I will die from excitment!!! And I like your writing!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
BlackCat-IIIX In reply to stormylol [2010-07-14 08:17:56 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I would love if she could continue with the story!. And thankyou so much!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
ObsessionInk16 [2010-05-25 23:09:35 +0000 UTC]
i really like it and am definently reading more
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
MakeBelieveSounds [2010-01-28 21:37:22 +0000 UTC]
I really like this so far and I'm not a fan of fan fictions. Just one crit, there are kind of a lot of grammar errors.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
BlackCat-IIIX In reply to MakeBelieveSounds [2010-05-31 08:43:45 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you liked it, yeah I'm sorry about all the errors but I barely have time to put these things up (or check my messages as you can see from my incredibly slow reply) let alone check for errors, but I have tried to improve that in the later chapters
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
random-waffles [2010-01-11 20:39:20 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait to read more!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
HeatherTheCat [2009-07-28 16:16:19 +0000 UTC]
that was amazing!!!!
keep it up! lol. i love your writing style. more please!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
kimurashizuka [2009-06-28 17:48:53 +0000 UTC]
sounds real interesting so far! i cant wait for more chapters (:
and her ankle... ouch. i can imagine how it looks like because something like that happened to me, only mine is less serious. (you can see the flesh and the toe bone and there was this pool and trail of blood all over the floor but still. i remember crying only five minutes after i got cut. how slow.)
and the blood... no magic! how are they gonna fix that? D:
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
BlackCat-IIIX In reply to kimurashizuka [2009-06-30 13:50:57 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
Ouch! that sounds like it would hurt, poor you. It was probably the shock or adrenalin that stopped you from fealing it for a little bit ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
kimurashizuka In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2009-06-30 14:02:47 +0000 UTC]
i dunno. but i was real calm,and said "hey,someone's bleeding here. a little help please?"
i think i gave them a scare though. there was so much blood. it didnt really hurt until they got me to use an alcohol swipe to clean the wound. it stings like crazy and i cried more D:
and in the 2 weeks i had my stitches on, it hurt to even walk ; ^ ;
but it still hurts now when i walk/run too much, or even just stand too long. and sometimes it feels like my toe is only half there. (and its past a year since i got injured)
sorry if i sound like i'm complaining or something.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
BlackCat-IIIX In reply to kimurashizuka [2009-06-30 14:12:28 +0000 UTC]
No problem, sounds like an aweful injury! Yuck alcohol swipes are evil!!!! Wow stiches and everything, kinda cool.
Sorry to hear it still hurts sometimes!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
kimurashizuka In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2009-06-30 14:54:02 +0000 UTC]
stitches are cool. you dont feel the needle unless they dont give you enough anesthetics (which,sadly,happened to me)
its like this cold thing running down your bloodstream towards your heart. pretty scary but still cool xD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
BlackCat-IIIX In reply to kimurashizuka [2009-06-30 15:31:29 +0000 UTC]
Wow, yeah I've never had stiches or broken a bone, had a few bad sprains and bruises though...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
kimurashizuka In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2009-06-30 15:37:11 +0000 UTC]
sprains and bruises are already bad enough. take care,girl!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
kimurashizuka In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2009-06-30 16:37:49 +0000 UTC]
same here. most probably more of the clumsy for me though. i can fall on perfectly flat ground.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
BlackCat-IIIX In reply to kimurashizuka [2009-07-05 13:29:40 +0000 UTC]
Me too! lol I don't even know how it can possibly happen but it does... alot!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
| Next =>