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BlackCat-IIIX — Rose and Scorpious Part 1
Published: 2009-06-28 17:12:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 3423; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 5
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Description I was running up the staircase at top speed, I only had a few minutes to get to the library. I would have made it too, if the stairs hadn't suddenly started to move. Taken completely unawares I lost balance, and would have falled all the way back down to the floor bellow, if I wasn't suddenly halted by someone, a boy by the sound of his grunt.
Unfortuantely for him my speed made him loose balance too. We both yelped as we tumbled backwards. But thankfully he had slowed me down and we only went down a few stairs.
It seemed lady luck wasn't on my side today, I ended up with my saviour on top of me. I couldn't help groaning when I saw the platinum blonde hair. Please god! Please don't let it be Scorpious Malfoy! I shut my eyes, but my fears were confirmed as he climbed off me and asked 'You ok Weasly? Sorry I tried to help but I think I only squished you in the process'
I sat up and replied 'No you did help Malfoy, thank you. I think I'm ok, your not that heavy,' I said with a grin, Malfoy was about as skinny as they come. 'I have a bit of a sore ankle and a few bruises but I'll live.'
'Thats good, I think I would die of bordem without someone to compete with,' he grinned. He offered me his hand and I took it, but only ended up pulling him back ontop of me, as I went limp from the pain in my ankle.
'Rose?' he asked, his voice clearly panicked.
'My ankle...' I whimpered. Merlins beard the pain!
'Let me have a look. You may have sprai-' he started, but was interupted.
'Well look if it isn't an injured Weasle' I felt Malfoy stiffen. 'Good job Scorp! I never thought to try pushing her down the stairs! Now c'mon lets scrom before Longbottom catches us!' Ray Fletchly called from the top of the stairs.
'Sod off Fletchly! I didn't push her, and she needs some help, she did something to her ankle,' Scorpious snapped.
'Your betraying our house being kind to a Gryffindor Malfoy! And a Weasly at that! You muddy the grand name of Slytherin!' Snarled the burly sixth year.
'Tjhe name of Slytherin is as dirty as a dungbomb Fletchly, I'm one of the many trying to restore it. And it's gargoyles like you who are destroying our work.'
'You'll pay for that Malfoy!' Ray bellowed, before storming off.
'Good he's gone. Now let me see your ankle,' Scorpious said turining back to me.
'You shouldn't have pissed off Fletchly like that, not over me, he's a horrible piece of work!'
'Rose Weasly, don't be dense. He was insulting me just as much as you, and I can easily hold my own agains him. Now your ankle.' He insisted.
I pulled up the hem of my robe, we both gasped. My ankle was a bloody mess and it was impossible to miss the white of bone, poking out at an hidious angle.
'Merlins beard and earwax! How do you not notice that?' Scorpious spluttered, looking slightly green.
'Um... Adrenilan?' I suggested faintly. 'Which I think is wearing off. This really hurts! It's even worse than when I colided with you in that Quiditch match last year.' Malfoy winced at the memory.
'We have to get you to the hosp- WHAT THE!' he cried out as he was tossed forrward as both ends of the accursed staircase detatched themselves from their rightful floors, and spun around stopping suspended in mid air.
For the third time in ten minutes I found Scorpius Malfoy -the boy I've had a crush on almost since the first time I'd seen him, just over five years ago- lying on top of me. This is getting too much! 'Malfoy get off of me, before I do something we regret!' I snapped.
'You can't do anything Rose, they put us in lockdown. All the teachers are out peforming some sort of protective charm, so they're stopping us from getting in trouble by preventing the use of magic, and as an added thing, from moving to different floors. Remember? We're stuck here for the next two ours Weasly!'
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Comments: 56

AndromedaMooneater [2013-02-04 20:22:50 +0000 UTC]

I luv it can't stop reading

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this-secert [2012-01-23 21:38:29 +0000 UTC]

this is really good! did you write more?

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to this-secert [2012-02-02 12:27:29 +0000 UTC]

Ah thank you so much yes I completed this story ^_^
Part 2 is here --> [link]
Part 3 [link]
Part 4 [link]
Part 5 [link]
and a oneshot set after the story here --> [link]

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this-secert In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2012-02-03 13:31:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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kiki5n [2011-09-03 09:21:51 +0000 UTC]

NOT PARTICULLARLY GREAT?!?!?!?!

Oh, wait your right, it ISN'T particullarly great... it's AMAZING!!!

I LOOOVE THESE TWO!!! I've been looking for fanfictions of them, but with no luck... but then BOOM! You throw THIS at me and.. wow!!! It simply ROCKS, nuff said....

I'd say moar but.. I wanna read chaptre 2 8D See ya there!

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to kiki5n [2011-09-07 23:31:00 +0000 UTC]

It's really cool to see someone likes my writing
I think there's a few fanfictions on www.fanfiction.net of these two, there's something like 100,000 harry potter fanfics so i'd be surprised if there wasn't

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kiki5n In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2011-09-08 18:31:45 +0000 UTC]

Cool! I'll check Thanks!

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Crystalkit1 [2011-06-03 01:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow, i love it!

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to Crystalkit1 [2011-06-05 03:14:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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Crystalkit1 In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2011-06-06 02:48:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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hellodragon [2011-03-26 18:10:02 +0000 UTC]

I love the idea! You just need to work on your grammar a little bit, but other than that, it's fantastic(:

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to hellodragon [2011-04-08 00:31:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks, yeah I'm always loosing marks for grammar and spelling in school , I do try with my stories but I don't often have much time to edit them...

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hellodragon In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2011-04-08 01:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Well, you can ask one of your friends if they can spare a minute to read it over, and fix the mistakes!

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to hellodragon [2011-04-20 08:11:37 +0000 UTC]

haha yeah that's a good idea, they'll be surprised to hear i write though thanks

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hellodragon In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2011-04-20 14:53:51 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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TaylorStarr [2011-01-30 05:47:53 +0000 UTC]

This sounds interesting and cute!

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to TaylorStarr [2011-02-26 10:46:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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TaylorStarr In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2011-02-27 03:24:01 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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the-publisher [2010-12-10 05:57:18 +0000 UTC]

blackcat-iiix the writing work you have done is really good i loved it so much that i printed it out and made a frout cover for it using one of your artworks dont worry about me taking all the credit i put your user name (because i dont know your real name) on it and copywrited it as one of your works. Im going to show this to all my friends because i loved it so much

the-publisher

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to the-publisher [2010-12-12 09:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow thank you so much! I'm really flattered
Welcome to DA btw

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the-publisher In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2010-12-12 23:38:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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stormylol [2010-07-14 05:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Scorpious and Rose! If JK Rowling continues in this generation, I will die from excitment!!! And I like your writing!

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to stormylol [2010-07-14 08:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I would love if she could continue with the story!. And thankyou so much!

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ObsessionInk16 [2010-05-25 23:09:35 +0000 UTC]

i really like it and am definently reading more

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to ObsessionInk16 [2010-05-31 08:42:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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MakeBelieveSounds [2010-01-28 21:37:22 +0000 UTC]

I really like this so far and I'm not a fan of fan fictions. Just one crit, there are kind of a lot of grammar errors.

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to MakeBelieveSounds [2010-05-31 08:43:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you liked it, yeah I'm sorry about all the errors but I barely have time to put these things up (or check my messages as you can see from my incredibly slow reply) let alone check for errors, but I have tried to improve that in the later chapters

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Shakuhachi13 [2010-01-12 20:30:07 +0000 UTC]

YOU MUST WRITE MORE!! if i dont read the end i'll die!! this is wicked awesome!!

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to Shakuhachi13 [2010-01-13 11:04:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much. The rest of the story is in my gallery, i just haven't put it up on the groups site yet

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Shakuhachi13 In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2010-01-13 20:01:23 +0000 UTC]

ok i'll check it out pronto!! thanks!!

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to Shakuhachi13 [2010-01-14 02:26:44 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^

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random-waffles [2010-01-11 20:39:20 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to read more!

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to random-waffles [2010-01-12 04:21:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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random-waffles In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2010-01-12 20:27:11 +0000 UTC]

No prob.!

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HeatherTheCat [2009-07-28 16:16:19 +0000 UTC]

that was amazing!!!!
keep it up! lol. i love your writing style. more please!!

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to HeatherTheCat [2009-07-29 00:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!!!!
Welcome to DA!!!

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HeatherTheCat In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2009-07-29 03:00:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to HeatherTheCat [2009-07-29 07:41:16 +0000 UTC]

welcome :3

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HeatherTheCat In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2009-07-31 02:02:49 +0000 UTC]

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kimurashizuka [2009-06-28 17:48:53 +0000 UTC]

sounds real interesting so far! i cant wait for more chapters (:

and her ankle... ouch. i can imagine how it looks like because something like that happened to me, only mine is less serious. (you can see the flesh and the toe bone and there was this pool and trail of blood all over the floor but still. i remember crying only five minutes after i got cut. how slow.)
and the blood... no magic! how are they gonna fix that? D:

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to kimurashizuka [2009-06-30 13:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
Ouch! that sounds like it would hurt, poor you. It was probably the shock or adrenalin that stopped you from fealing it for a little bit ^^

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kimurashizuka In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2009-06-30 14:02:47 +0000 UTC]

i dunno. but i was real calm,and said "hey,someone's bleeding here. a little help please?"
i think i gave them a scare though. there was so much blood. it didnt really hurt until they got me to use an alcohol swipe to clean the wound. it stings like crazy and i cried more D:
and in the 2 weeks i had my stitches on, it hurt to even walk ; ^ ;

but it still hurts now when i walk/run too much, or even just stand too long. and sometimes it feels like my toe is only half there. (and its past a year since i got injured)

sorry if i sound like i'm complaining or something.

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to kimurashizuka [2009-06-30 14:12:28 +0000 UTC]

No problem, sounds like an aweful injury! Yuck alcohol swipes are evil!!!! Wow stiches and everything, kinda cool.
Sorry to hear it still hurts sometimes!

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kimurashizuka In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2009-06-30 14:54:02 +0000 UTC]

stitches are cool. you dont feel the needle unless they dont give you enough anesthetics (which,sadly,happened to me)
its like this cold thing running down your bloodstream towards your heart. pretty scary but still cool xD

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to kimurashizuka [2009-06-30 15:31:29 +0000 UTC]

Wow, yeah I've never had stiches or broken a bone, had a few bad sprains and bruises though...

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kimurashizuka In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2009-06-30 15:37:11 +0000 UTC]

sprains and bruises are already bad enough. take care,girl!

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to kimurashizuka [2009-06-30 15:50:11 +0000 UTC]

^^ thankyou, I try, I just seem to be incredibly clumsy, and probably a tad unlucky lol.

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kimurashizuka In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2009-06-30 16:37:49 +0000 UTC]

same here. most probably more of the clumsy for me though. i can fall on perfectly flat ground.

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BlackCat-IIIX In reply to kimurashizuka [2009-07-05 13:29:40 +0000 UTC]

Me too! lol I don't even know how it can possibly happen but it does... alot!

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kimurashizuka In reply to BlackCat-IIIX [2009-07-05 13:35:02 +0000 UTC]

maybe someone hates us. haha.

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