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BlackMage145 — Battle Prayer
Published: 2005-01-06 10:52:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 261; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 6
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Description Angel of Victory, raise your banner high
As we make ready for war
With sharp steel and strong arm
Spread your wings and fly to blackend sky

Angel of Battle, raise your sword high
Walk among us as we fight and slay
With battered shield and bloody blade
Spread your wings and fly to blackend sky

Angel of Death, raise your scythe high
As arrows fill the sky and rain like tears of death
And steel strike down the bold
Spread your wings and fly to blackend sky

Sisters in War and Sisters in Peace
With ivory wing, rise to blackend sky
And proclaim with banner, sword and scythe
That for warriors this is a time to fight


and the demon whispers: die die die
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Comments: 12

angelus13 [2006-07-29 18:02:47 +0000 UTC]

That is very good...I really like that...

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crystalvial [2005-01-28 16:31:18 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful...I'll write more later after I've truly digested it.

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BlackMage145 In reply to crystalvial [2005-01-29 09:57:30 +0000 UTC]

is that a good thing?

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crystalvial In reply to BlackMage145 [2005-01-29 14:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Haha....that's a very good thing. Poems are supposed ta be either stunningly elequont or make the reader think. You would not want a response offa the top of my head for this one. But-alas!-I have a response. I am most pleased by the tangible feel and thought captured around the esscences of war-the kind of wars they used to have-wars truly meant to be for better or for worse.

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BlackMage145 In reply to crystalvial [2005-01-29 15:58:10 +0000 UTC]

*blinks*

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Kapper [2005-01-23 18:03:33 +0000 UTC]

fedt, minder om en Manowar eller Slayer sang

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FinchyGurl99 [2005-01-10 10:00:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, I really like this. It's dark and beautiful.

Fantastic.

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BlackMage145 In reply to FinchyGurl99 [2005-01-10 10:11:16 +0000 UTC]

your making me

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FinchyGurl99 In reply to BlackMage145 [2005-01-10 10:54:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha, but with good intentions!

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BlackMage145 [2005-01-07 07:22:25 +0000 UTC]

There is nothing like a very inspirational muse...as I am sure my fellow deviants will agree with....

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Kazbiel [2005-01-06 23:08:01 +0000 UTC]

nice.

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Bysshe [2005-01-06 18:40:39 +0000 UTC]

I like it, dark and chilling

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