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BlackMage145 — ...Love...
Published: 2006-05-14 12:01:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 116; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Breaking down my masterworks, bringing fire to my burning passionRending my spirit asunder, making my mind explode with red fireworks
You are the sweet poison, making me gasp for air, killing me slowly
Your skin is pearl-white; your eyes are fiendishly vibrant
Your hair is coal-black, yet your mouth is a taunting smile breaking me
Your wear you executioners hood with your divine flair, signalling my doom to come
I cannot imagine your perfection within my minds eye, very moment without your vision is death
Your bring my poet-soul to a greatness reserved to gods, yet you snatch it away bringing me to my knees
I am at awe in your presence wanting to write sagas worthy of your beauty, and you strangle me slowly in every moment I live
I cry out to the faces of the world, begging them to free me from your grasp, yet the next morning I scar myself for this sacrilege
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thanks for both comments. I havent been able to find my artistic spark in a while and i have been too distracted with rping....i will eventually post more but now right now. thats for the watch too
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I don't think it's bad. I don't think it's knock-me-off-my-feet impressive though. But it's the first I've read of yours and it's promising.
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Man is that a powerful poem. Good job. Btw i'm now watching you magicboy. ^^
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