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Published: 2005-02-01 09:24:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 344; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 14
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Description Glinting blade, ivory white
Armour grey, stout defender
Shield high, skill and strength

Hard skin, scarred dry
Muscles strong, trained and ready
Strength enduring, never stopping

Warrior young, fireborn
Forges hard, proud soul
War coming, spear ready

Mane white, long wild
Helmet hard, feathered plume
Tattoo red, lion shape

Lioness of battle, discipline and honour
Round shield, spear long
Armour heavy, sword unleashed

Rain of arrow, high from heavens
Screams of death, screams of battle
First Charge, Banners High

War, may I have the next dance?
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Comments: 9

Els-peth [2007-04-06 15:14:06 +0000 UTC]

Lovely poem.

Reminds me of my Global class though, a bit.

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BlackMage145 In reply to Els-peth [2007-04-07 07:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...I really need to get more done

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Els-peth In reply to BlackMage145 [2007-04-07 12:58:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

Good luck. :3

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Kim-Ai1 [2005-02-01 17:57:39 +0000 UTC]

WOAH!!! O.O That was GREAT! I looooved the last line! XD "War, may I have the next dance?" wow..... @_@ ^^ great job! XD

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BlackMage145 In reply to Kim-Ai1 [2005-02-01 18:33:15 +0000 UTC]

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Kyonshigirl [2005-02-01 09:42:35 +0000 UTC]

OOOOOO coolie oolie I like it.

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GirlInTheMoon [2005-02-01 09:26:24 +0000 UTC]

very good.

quite good hoq you've put at the end, "war, may i have the next dance"

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BlackMage145 In reply to GirlInTheMoon [2005-02-01 09:27:05 +0000 UTC]

kinda obsessed with the warrior ideal at the moment

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GirlInTheMoon In reply to BlackMage145 [2005-02-01 09:27:59 +0000 UTC]

i see.
i could tell
well, its good

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