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BlackStormAngel — Hate. Deep In The Mirror
Published: 2012-02-22 20:37:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Decaying inside the smell of hate.Lasting forever the fear that it makes.
Deep into your sorrowful story.
Lasting until the pages turn to eternity.
Who is this person?
The one who stares back?
Into the mirror a reflection of sadness.
Another world waiting for her.
Lost into her darkest thoughts.
Into the fires she has set herself.
Burn into the ashes.
Suffocating inside of her own heart.
What does she want?
The creature that smiles back.
The lost children who have fallen from thine path.
Love to hate.
Live to breath.
Hold thy breath.
Bringing her peace.
Fly. Into an unknown future.
To Discover her darkest dreams.
The Dreams that pull her into the mirror.
Through her own hatred. Her wrath still unfelt.
Deep into this madness where there is no way out.
Fall into a world of thine rage.
Feel those flames burning into the bone.
Cut out the good one.
Her view split in two.
Her vision burning red.
While she turns to you.
Can she see through that mirror?
The maddening blood that races into her own skull.
She will not let you run.
No not anymore.
This world is now hers. So feel the hidden thrill.
As she rips you open to see what is inside.
Deep in that heart.
An everlasting demise.
A silent dream that is...
A Horrid genocide.
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Thank you so much for liking it. ^.^ I hope others like it too. So far it's not as popular as some of my others >.< So I don't know if this one is too awesome but so far at least someone has read it. >O> I put some story ideas up too but so far no ones read them >.< Perhaps I am better at poetry? In any case I am only prattling on XD
Thanks for enjoying it ^.^ I try so hard to make them good XD
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try going to bed tonight and dreaming about your favorite dream- do you wish you had wings? were a dragon?... then write about that. I'm writing a story titled "Immune" about a girl who is half-dragon... (dont steal my idea please)
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Not to worry I would never ever steal anyone's idea. But when you get it done I would love to read it. ( Loves reading stories that others have done ) Hmm as for dreams... I could make another poem on it. Yet different... If I do come up with a dream poem I would probably thank you for that one. >o> I wrote one about dreams when I was younger but I do think an update would be fun. ^.^ Probably won't be popular like my old work.
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well it depends on how you write it ^^ I'm changing my book ideas completely,
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this is a combination of 3 book ideas that I had, Immune, Felin and Wolf Wings, I'm thinking about changing the title & intro cause they suck -.- anyway i think the dream poem would be/could be more popular than your old work because you have more experience.
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