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blackunicorn282 — I Wish
Published: 2004-11-15 01:41:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description I wish I was lovely
Or fair
Or pretty
I wish I was smart
Or clever
Or witty

I wish I was decent
Or pleasant
Or good
I wish I was taken
Or appreciated
Or understood

I wish I was happy
Or content
Or bright
I wish I was proper
Or precise
Or right

I wish I was cherished
Or treasured
Or preferred
I wish I was anything
That someone could love,
Is that so absurd?
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Comments: 5

lizard-baci [2004-11-15 04:07:54 +0000 UTC]

ate my other comment... i said i love it.

and ps we need to get you a screenshot...

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blackunicorn282 In reply to lizard-baci [2004-11-16 01:46:10 +0000 UTC]

thanx dude!!!!! and.. um.. ok!!!

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lizard-baci [2004-11-15 04:06:38 +0000 UTC]

love it.

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darkelvenmage [2004-11-15 01:44:45 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, very pretty, I really like the flow and the rhyming! Its a wonderful poem ^^

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blackunicorn282 In reply to darkelvenmage [2004-11-15 01:47:25 +0000 UTC]

thanx!!!!!

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