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Published: 2004-01-07 01:16:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description head thinking thoughts
gut feeling fears
heart full of pain
eyes crying tears

mind all a blur
voice sighing screams
inside full of emptyness
memories of broken dreams

yearsfull of doubt
tears hot with hate
life is nothing
don't leave it to fate
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Comments: 4

Pure-Dax [2005-05-08 17:00:25 +0000 UTC]

Uber

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blackunicorn282 In reply to Pure-Dax [2005-05-12 23:14:31 +0000 UTC]

i'm going to guess that that is good..?

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basilsheppard [2004-01-07 21:47:26 +0000 UTC]

I agree w/ betsy... but I don't have any real feel for what you are going through. I really like it as well.

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lizard-baci [2004-01-07 03:02:28 +0000 UTC]

i really like that. its wonderfully written. however, i dont know that " life is nothing/dont leave it to fate" really fits. maybe... "life is not nothing"??

i think i kinda understand what you may be going thru, (even tho we havent kept in touch that much), and if im right, im goin thru something very similiar, so i know where these words came from.

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