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Jagged Peak: Your weak...no wonder you died so fast

Cinderpelt: Excuse me?! I died protecting my cla-

Jagged Peak: Not that!! Your weak willed....You wanted to be a warrior and you ended up in a hole curing cats....weak willed...

Cinderpelt: Im proud to be a medicine cat! Besides I had no choice! I hurt my leg and could never be warrior...I-I dont have time for this!!*walks away from him*

Jagged Peak: Is that what they told you??

Cinderpelt: *stops*

Jagged Peak: They told you what you couldn't become and you excepted it?? You gave up your dreams because you got hurt? Did you even bother to get back up and try??

Cinderpelt:I-I...Yellowfang said....It wasnt possible....I...

Jagged Peak: You didnt bother to chase your dream,it doesnt matter what injury happens to you,if you truly had the heart a of warrior you would have stood on your remaining legs and train harder than anyone to prove them wrong!! You would have looked your mentor in the eyes and said,"LETS TRAIN"!! YOU DON'T QUIT UNTIL YOU CANT MOVE ANYMORE,YOU PUSH YOURSELF UNTIL YOU BECOME WHAT YOU WANTED!! INSTEAD, you let some cat tell you who you could and couldn't become!! ALL THIS TIME....ALL THOSE LOST DREAMS YOU HAD....ALL THOSE TIMES YOU THOUGHT"WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN".....It was under your nose all this time...

Cinderpelt: *without looking back* What do you know about my dreams??

Jagged Peak: I have lived a warrior,had a mate,raised kits of my own and fought many battles...My brothers looked down at me because I couldn't use my leg....I showed them all...I didn't let their words define who I became.....All that time Cinderpelt.....You could've been a warrior...

Cinderpelt: *tears up*

Jagged Peak: Yellowfang told you what you couldn't do....Im telling you what could've done.....You will walk the path of a warrior again *hisses* and this time follow your dreams you once had

Cinderpelt: *looks back at Jagged Peak with a smile before being reborn* Thank you....
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I liked the idea of Jagged Peak scolding Cinderpelt,I love Jagged Peak so much. He is such a boss!

He was seen weak and then with the help of Holly he became respected by all and had a his own family. I always pictured him in Star Clan grumpy at cat in star clan when he sees cats put others down over a injury. IDK that's just me but you have to admit he lived as an awesome cat.

Also I think Yellowfang is low key is a hypocrite

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Jagged Peak: Your weak...no wonder you died so fast

Cinderpelt: Excuse me?! I died protecting my cla-

Jagged Peak: Not that!! Your weak willed....You wanted to be a warrior and you ended up in a hole curing cats....weak willed...

Cinderpelt: Im proud to be a medicine cat! Besides I had no choice! I hurt my leg and could never be warrior...I-I dont have time for this!!*walks away from him*

Jagged Peak: Is that what they told you??

Cinderpelt: *stops*

Jagged Peak: They told you what you couldn't become and you excepted it?? You gave up your dreams because you got hurt? Did you even bother to get back up and try??

Cinderpelt:I-I...Yellowfang said....It wasnt possible....I...

Jagged Peak: You didnt bother to chase your dream,it doesnt matter what injury happens to you,if you truly had the heart a of warrior you would have stood on your remaining legs and train harder than anyone to prove them wrong!! You would have looked your mentor in the eyes and said,"LETS TRAIN"!! YOU DON'T QUIT UNTIL YOU CANT MOVE ANYMORE,YOU PUSH YOURSELF UNTIL YOU BECOME WHAT YOU WANTED!! INSTEAD, you let some cat tell you who you could and couldn't become!! ALL THIS TIME....ALL THOSE LOST DREAMS YOU HAD....ALL THOSE TIMES YOU THOUGHT"WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN".....It was under your nose all this time...

Cinderpelt: *without looking back* What do you know about my dreams??

Jagged Peak: I have lived a warrior,had a mate,raised kits of my own and fought many battles...My brothers looked down at me because I couldn't use my leg....I showed them all...I didn't let their words define who I became.....All that time Cinderpelt.....You could've been a warrior...

Cinderpelt: *tears up*

Jagged Peak: Yellowfang told you what you couldn't do....Im telling you what could've done.....You will walk the path of a warrior again *hisses* and this time follow your dreams you once had

Cinderpelt: *looks back at Jagged Peak with a smile before being reborn* Thank you....
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I liked the idea of Jagged Peak scolding Cinderpelt,I love Jagged Peak so much. He is such a boss!

He was seen weak and then with the help of Holly he became respected by all and had a his own family. I always pictured him in Star Clan grumpy at cat in star clan when he sees cats put others down over a injury. IDK that's just me but you have to admit he lived as an awesome cat.

Also I think Yellowfang is low key is a hypocrite